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Dont be a Menace ... ..




you can't guard me one on one, I lose control when you battle me
do a lyrical crossover and make you sprain your mentality/
im bout ta murda you quick and, do us all a fava'
you could be an important voice message, and I still wouldn't save ya/
ima slay’ya playa, say’ya muthafukkin prayers,
if u battled me as a white bus driver at a carnival, still wouldnt be fair/
end’this Menace, blemished on false premise, no question who did it
i'm not a pimp but, I'll cut ya hand off, and slap you wit it/
you lose cuz I'll bruise, any response you choose
you ain't street, I seen you on stage doin Beyonce' moves/
youz a female rapper, I’ll throw your appraoch off
cut your flow off like tampons, you "out tha game" like you pissed tha coach off/
your intellect I disconnect, til you confused in the head
you should give your girl a microphone, and let her use it in bed/
if you cap at me, gravity's comin rapidly
couldn't see me losin, if I was lookin in a mirror rappin’ and battlin me/
you heathanistic, i breathe ballistic hot psalms,
send you back to gaywackpreteens.com/
if you was a doctor or a microsurgeon,
you still couldnt decipher my dumb donald version/
murda you in slow mo, or maybe twice as fast,
either way i my votes go up like tha price of gas/
wanted to stop me but couldn't, cause I caught you first,
dig a clothes hanger in your brain, and abort your verse/
bitch, you aint no Menace, youz a juvenile delinquent,
i'll knock ya brain hemishperes tha fukk out of sequence/
a suicidal fate tha very moment this menace replys
send you a step below hell, where satan goes when he dies/
i sever feet with deep heat and speak how your forever weak,
this ain't no birthday party bitch, my 16's are never sweet/
i'll eat your illest prewrit scripts an shit your wack lines,
at that time, my keystroke clap nines leave you more holy than back nines ... .. .


semoC yaW sihT dekciW gnihtmoS nehW redruM ydoolB

AnD HeRe We Go!!

Imma set flame to this lame so he'll never move}
eliminating any expectations that he thinks he'll ever measure to}
after you study this script all gonna be quik to say i kinda heath ledger'd you!!!}
motherfucker watch who you steppin to droppin 16 so this means i'll only need 8 to lechur you}
effortless your to sensitive soft hearted and frail}
i got mike jones in a downward cyclone who started with garbage and failed}
in all aspects you aint an asset droppin no sick numbers}
imma have em wait to raise the crime rate for this myspace no hit wonder}

YoU StuPiD MoThERfuCKA!!!!!!!!

opener-insTRUmental
flow-istrumental..easier to follow..IMO
multies-tie...both had inners and outers but instru's and menaces last lines didnt nail the multi..menaces was shorter so he had an advantage for multi's but didnt capitalise on it..
punches-instrumental -menace only had 1 weak pun IMO..
name/word play-instrumental
closer-menace


Vote=insTRUmental

menace has some aight concepts just needs to use a few punches(it's a battle)...no hate though..ya lyrically decent just gotta
try using euphamisms...and wordplay personalize the drop so it's not so universal..1

punches-tied
multis-tied
nameplay-instr.
creative-menace
flow-menace
opener-menace
closer-menace

it was close but menace got it i think instrumental came hard but not enough plus menace was more creative i think

v/menace

Menace u got sum talent but shame on you for tryna answer that 36 with 8 lines you should at least did 20 and even so i could def see the fyre in instrumentals verse he was hitting from all cylinders

vote: instrumental

^an' thas real ..2-1 ..

lol, Reck, i got love fa you mah nigga .. i give you a mafia kiss on tha cheek ...

punches-Instrumental
multis-tied
nameplay-Instrumental
creative-Tie
flow-Tie

This was a decent battle. I gotta say that I believe Menace underestimated Instrumental's verse. Dude dropped 4 times the bars as you and was pretty damn consistent with his punches. Both could have had much better nameplays. Flow was good overall, a little sketchy in a couple spots, but it worked. I think you guys should rematch and have the same amount of bars.

vote= Instrumental

Oh, I didn't include this in my decision, but Menace, that typing in mixed caps and shit is fucking aNnOyInG.

^^i would have no prob with that but im not sittin here typin 100 lines more like 15

3-1 Instrumental

Don't really think this was "fair" cus menace only dropped half of what instrumental did----??----fucks up with that.

Anyway, I give it to instrumental, his flow was way smoother, his multies were good, funny thing is, some of instru's punches were played, but since he had a longer verse, he had more opportunity to make up for it.

vote-instrumental

4-1 instrumental

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