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[Phasewon- The Fourth Horseman: Death]
I've crafted mixtures, of images, depicted in graphic pictures
From satanic figures, who predicted my existence in Catholic scriptures
Every chapter's sicker, each passage worse, in the pastor's verse
That said my after-birth, would impact the surface and crack the earth
At the church, I was labeled the Angel of Death
That would lay you to rest, strangle your neck, and inhale your breath
Traded my halo for lent, and tried to increase the murder rate
So I received an early fate, and was barred from the pearly gates
I hurdled straight to the second realm, stumbled out of Heaven and fell
Then was summoned by the Devil himself, from the ninth level of Hell
He said he could help, and gave me an artificial heart and tissue
With a death list, and an enlargened sickle, sharp as ginsu
Slipped through the dark to get you, as I rode on a knight's horse
Resurrected the soul of the Christ corpse, and he sold me his life force
My source of knowledge is, perceived as a prophet's gift
So not even God'll live, on the eve of the Apocalypse

Now start runnin', this is your forewarnin'
You can tell that I'm comin', 'cause the storms formin'
Born swordsman, each plague of the Lord gets more morbid
Feel the wrath, if you step in the path, of the Fourth Horseman

[Thunder Sound]

I hurdled straight to the second realm, stumbled out of Heaven and fell
Then was summoned by the Devil himself, from the ninth level of Hell

that was my favorite lines^^^

shit was dope homie, rhymes tied it all together nicely, dope concept, been used quite a lot, but you put your swag and style into it. which made it yours. everything was on point. great drop homie

yeah this was tied together very nicely flowed well all the way thru at one jus one point where u changed a rhyme it went a lil bit put u quickly picked that ish up again the multies was crazy in this an the imagery vocab an complexity was fire aswell this is a pretty good piece not as good as one of ya others but i like this shyt mayne very well done
keep'em comin

This shit was clean! Great flow, excellent imagery, nice multies, some nasty rhyme schemes. Very solid post. I give it an A.

This was str8 sick i love the concept and how educated u were with heaven n heal before writing this peice everything was on point another hit

shiiit, props for the feed yall, definitely much appreciated.

gadamn, thats wat im talking about.
some sadist acid rap dark shit! sickkening!
really like it, i follow the sort of concepts u talk about !
sickkk A++