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a audio im working on

"Stuck in drive"

Look at life, straight stuck in drive
moving forward as people live an die
feel my vibe,
broke and hopeless needin focus, in my life
try an ease off the gas but still move in strides
i can smoke an fly, but time keeps winding
some will say was all it just bad timing
and this climate, was this bad till the 90's
so i plubish my findings, inside a book
but find it means nothin if nobody looks
somebody look!! please cause if its only me
than i shut the fuck up an forget to breathe
an get to leave,
cause we fucked up n you know its wrong
picture everything, you know is gone
floating on.. the debris of a destroyed planet
void of families, an humans deployed the damage
toyed with panic, tell it bit us in ass
diggin holes in the ground just to get at the gas
thats not even needed, cause we can move pass
all of that crap.
but for all of our technologies, and global policies
we can't seem to stop and be acknowleging
that the world as we know it, changin time is slowin
whole continants will turn to open oceans
woah homie better slow your motions
cause those that speak out, are sure get silenced
but i have no fear of death.. its modern defiance



just a quick lil snipplet of truely audio text

Look at life, straight stuck in drive
moving forward as people live an die
feel my vibe,
broke and hopeless needin focus, in my life
try an ease off the gas but still move in strides
-NICE OPENER, FEELIN THAT
i can smoke an fly, but time keeps winding
some will say was all it just bad timing
and this climate, was this bad till the 90's
-OK OK
so i plubish my findings, inside a book
but find it means nothin if nobody looks
-OK
somebody look!! please cause if its only me
than i shut the fuck up an forget to breathe
an get to leave,
-NOT REALLY FEELIN IT...
cause we fucked up n you know its wrong
picture everything, you know is gone
-OK
floating on.. the debris of a destroyed planet
void of families, an humans deployed the damage
-NICE, FEELIN IT
toyed with panic, tell it bit us in ass
diggin holes in the ground just to get at the gas
thats not even needed, cause we can move pass
all of that crap.
-BLAH
but for all of our technologies, and global policies
we can't seem to stop and be acknowleging
-NICE
that the world as we know it, changin time is slowin
whole continants will turn to open oceans
woah homie better slow your motions
-NICE
cause those that speak out, are sure get silenced
but i have no fear of death.. its modern defiance
-PERFECT CLOSER

iM FEELIN THIS ONE FOR THE MOST PART I LIKED THE CONCEPT AND EVEN THO IN SOME PARTS YOU WERE KINDA DRAGGIN YOU DEFINITLY PICKED IT UP AND MADE IT ALL COME TOGETHER....

NICE DROP MOD.....

thanks man, still uppin