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Dark Doctrine

Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 5:05 am
by Def-init
Behind a legion lost,
Satan’s watching and I don’t think he blinks.
His invitation is given...
but it's wrapped in the whip that built the Sphinx!!!
What if...the only light came from candles lit?
and Pagans ran around with no constant god present.
In a world so cold, the 'barrel on my fifth, fits!'
Sitting in her "Hello Kitty" Outfit
She seemed so innocent. The trigger pulls.
The hammer snaps, my heart rips!
Another soul lost in the Matrix...
Suffocating from self righteous hatred.
The shadows here eclipse the atlas
Children here question: "Can you defend us?"
I write to unleash evil. I do it with a cackle and grin.
Wrists, slit, vertical with...
all the rage contained in mass graves of sin

The Bloody and dramatic are considered immaculate.
when I conduct them like an orchestra with raw emotion.
Symbolizing a revolution of stone gardens in motion,
like inmates storming a prison.
The Kurds attacked with a full-forced pendulum swing
eating hearts soaked red with molasses.
Soaring through space lost in its dark vastness.
Riding black Camels equipped with burning crosses.
aerial strikes are never thought of as fiction.
A Phoenix lost forever in Babylon.
Conquest, War, Death and Famine are the horsemen!
Chapter Six.........The Book of Revelation.
Hate transcends time and transforms
behind embraced storms of sublime rhymes.
Even in space, what I write holds weight.
Like the fields of fire around the capital of Kuwait!
Or the increasing numbers associated with infant mortality rate!
How can we be free when born into 'financial slavery'?
Tolerance for the Holy Trinity?
Would rather believe in the possibility
of the Buddhist sculpture, not in the 'Kiss of Judas'
contained in the Holy Scripture.

Re: Dark Doctrine

Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 6:01 am
by eMCee Havic
pretty dope man, that political vibe flows hard off of this piece, nice visualls, good knowledge usage and vocab, i give it a 7 outta 10 flow fell off in some place, rhyme scheme was unm typical which i like, overall good drop

keep um comin my dude

Re: Dark Doctrine

Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 6:41 am
by ~Symbolikull~
it was hard for me to follow ur rhyme scheme in some places... but really it wasnt a big deal cuz i still enjoyed readin it.. it was writtin great and flow was thoroughly ill. i would rate this 7.5/10

Re: Dark Doctrine

Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:08 am
by ReCkinAll
nice..

im feelin that...

keep up the good work

Re: Dark Doctrine

Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:56 pm
by Haz
This Was Straight..

Reminds Me Alot Of Modern Defiance..
Good Vocab.. Political Shit..
In Some Places U Just Seemed A Little Off..
Only thing U Should Keep In Da Next Piece Is
Consistency..

Could Get More Lyrical..
Rhyme Scheme Was Bouncie
Cool Topic..

Keep Droppin