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deadline as soon as your ready

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NO FEEDING (as in no taking what i say and flipping it to your advantage)

no biting


how can this guy be'quick off the mark'when his flows are so'static'/
im throwing'venomous spits'at this prick like an 'arachnid spastic'/
Quicks your in the sand with scars and ya sinking like a lead balloon/
ill leave you squashed bitch... ur in ecconamy class with no leg room/
youll be dead soon. coz in this battle you cant match my raps/
im lighting the fires on tracks, like terrorist satchel packs/
see this crusty fake will never be fresh. while i bring-the-ripe-berries/
leaving you with the final thought on this shit ima spring-ya-like-jerry/

-- Sun May 31, 2009 5:06 pm --

i know i gave a loose deadline but no piss taking dude drop at some point soon lets get this ish rollin

-- Mon Jun 01, 2009 5:44 am --

long guy wtf.... how long were you looking on needing to drop? "quicks"

Main, you kiddin??

haHa
g' head, talk shit
i'm a Pause, and Stand Brave, mah Glockz and Fam stay; KoCked and Can Spray!
i'm droppin Fam, n Take Glockz ... and 'covering Scars' like Gauze and Band Aids!
You haven't Felt the Pain, Quix Conceptz so sick they bout tah Melt yah Brain!
Intelligent when i speak n write, watch me 'beat this guy' faster than he Spelt mah Name!
your not at All Good, Your Boring; yah barz make no sense like Your Prolly, Foriegn!
'Quix in charge' and watch me 'get rid of Scars' Faster than Poly-sporin!
your faulty cordz been ... Hurting ya swag, I'm Dispusing dah MAgz on ya Shirt n yah Flag
leave you Hurt in dah Jag,your 'spitting is whack', I'll be 'hittin yah Back' like i was Burping thiz Fag!...


Vote fair please!

flow: quix
rhymescheme: quix(scars only multi was in his last bar)
punches: quix(easily)
personals: quix(mentioning the name error+foreign)
metaphor/simile: mc scars

overall:quix

Pretty one sided in my opinion..Not the best of verses by either tho

Mc:
how can this guy be'quick off the mark'when his flows are so'static'/
im throwing'venomous spits'at this prick like an 'arachnid spastic'/
*ehh not the best opener, understand it but idk*

Quicks your in the sand with scars and ya sinking like a lead balloon/
ill leave you squashed bitch... ur in ecconamy class with no leg room/
*Economy class with no leg room? Not getting it*

youll be dead soon. coz in this battle you cant match my raps/
im lighting the fires on tracks, like terrorist satchel packs/
*ehh*

see this crusty fake will never be fresh. while i bring-the-ripe-berries/
leaving you with the final thought on this shit ima spring-ya-like-jerry/
*Finally a line I didn't have to read 100 times to try and understand it, prolly ur best line*


Quix:

i'm a Pause, and Stand Brave, mah Glockz and Fam stay; KoCked and Can Spray!
i'm droppin Fam, n Take Glockz ... and 'covering Scars' like Gauze and Band Aids!
*not a bad opener*

You haven't Felt the Pain, Quix Conceptz so sick they bout tah Melt yah Brain!
Intelligent when i speak n write, watch me 'beat this guy' faster than he Spelt mah Name!
*wording was a bit off understand what you meant tho..Mispelt ur name*

your not at All Good, Your Boring; yah barz make no sense like Your Prolly, Foriegn!
'Quix in charge' and watch me 'get rid of Scars' Faster than Poly-sporin!
*fav line so far, nice personal*

your faulty cordz been ... Hurting ya swag, I'm Dispusing dah MAgz on ya Shirt n yah Flag
leave you Hurt in dah Jag,your 'spitting is whack', I'll be 'hittin yah Back' like i was Burping thiz Fag!...
*Nice concept nice cloer*


Overall very onesided even with Quix's verse not being that great..


Vote= Quix

punches-quix
flow-quix
multi's-quix
personal-quix
wordplay-quix
etc,etc...

quix dominated this one hands down his verse just delivered alot more then mc's this was a no brainer

V/Quix

i dont think it was that much of a landslide but the nameplay ate mc scars up

vote : Quix

thats 3-0 in my book
but i'll vote anyways

personals-quix
meta- quix
flow-quix
punches-quix

overall quix

quix you just wooped dudes ass, i dont think Mc scars came hard enough out the gate.

4-0 KO

actually that's 5-0...

quix wins..

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