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Subsist vs Skywalker (winner Subsist)

Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:23 am
by Skywalker
alright

Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:25 am
by Subsist
Ill let you start.

Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:00 am
by Skywalker
ill drop my verse and lay my curse
you think your in first but people say ur tha worst

im hot man cuz i catch on fire like gasoline
ill slide through this battle like ur mom with sum vasoline

after this battle you should find sumthin else to do
cuz u cant spit even if sumone else did it for you

sendin me a pm sayin u wanna battle me
just another chance to extend my killin spree

You think your super man but im kryp-to-night
im like ray charles cuz im outta-sight

to win this battle your gonna have ta squeeze
ill leave ya paralyzed like christopher reeves

you say u rhymes are dope and ur name is subsist
but if i ask the kids in you town they call you tha rapist

Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:02 am
by Skywalker
not good

Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:36 am
by Subsist
You better be leavin this battle real quick//
Only thing im squeezen is your ass on my dick//

Yeah Im the rapist , I rape cats-like-you//
Yea I'm the greatest , Ill leave your ass-white-n-blue//

My rhymes'll get you so high you'll feel imperial//
My lines'll eat you up like a box of cerial//

My rhymes are spherical , round and round you go//
You're just hysterical , if you think you can pass my flow//

Talkin about layin your curse , I dont know whats worse//
Your last verse , or the day your mom gave birth//

Krypt-to-night , ill-rip-you-right , out-my-sight//
in-this-fight , my rhymes are endless-right?//

Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 9:00 am
by precise
hmm, not bad both of you are still gettin better.

multies--->SubSist
flow--->skywalker
wordplay--->skywalker(for the kryp-to-night)
entertainment--->subsist
overall i think Subsist took this one, close tho

vote=subsist

Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 12:13 pm
by 16 Micz
hhmm
entertainment - subsist
similes - sky
wordplay - sky
personals - sky
vocab - subsist
rhyming - sub

overall - subsist, i enjoyed his more and his was structed better as well.close battle, really close if u ask me, both verses werent so good but hopefully sky can elevate...lookin forward to more posts.

Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 1:54 pm
by Skywalker
can we get sum more votes

Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 2:55 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
punchlines:subsist
similies:skywalker
flow:subsist
rhyming:skywalker
personals:.. there were no personals really lol
multis: subsist
vocab:subsist

overall:subsist

my 2 cents: seemed pretty close even tho subsist took most of the categories.. im not gonna say it was a good battle but it wasn't too bad for some rookies

Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 9:13 pm
by precise
3-0 ko, battle closed *records updated*