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Smash gets it in with the bars heavy....LET'S GO!


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Damn nigga, you're like the Barry White of Hip-Hop wit that deep-ass voice of yours! haha Nah I'm clownin, but on a real note, shit was pretty nice. Had sum humorous bars in there, steady flow. Mixing could use a little tweeking...but nothing serious.
At anything else...I'd say just lower the volume on your ad-libs and background talk a bit. You want them to be subtle, and not as powerful as the primary lyrics in your verse. When they're that loud...they take away from the verse's clarity.
All-in-all...it was a decent track, and I loved the choice of beat! haha
Keep droppin pimp.
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Good looking Kurse.......feedback is always appreciated......mixing can most def use some fixing up so Ima jump on the cool edit and tweak some shit........1
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dude this was fire man... lyrics were hella dope... flows consistent as hell... i liked it man the lines in it were funny too... good shit man keep droppin...
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