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4 lines max.

2 punches max.

Direct punches.

Due in 3 days.

scramble ur guts, small to large, jus why are you so nervous?
prolly cuz ur soft like big titties u only act hard on the surface,

an i dont necessarily aim to kill, im learnin torture methods,
stick a pin thru this killahs chest in an abnormal forced direction,

You wouldn't have a heart of fire with a flame ta chest
Thats why im killing off SIMS/SYM like im gaming with teks

You be sucking mad dick and you house the remnants/
So if you ever kicked flows its cuz ya mouth was pregnant!!/

Nice punches fellas.. il vote in a few..if not a lil later

damm this was close

scramble ur guts, small to large, jus why are you so nervous?
prolly cuz ur soft like big titties u only act hard on the surface,

^funny assed bar 7/10
nice hard hitting
but not all that great
lost the flow abit in the second line

an i dont necessarily aim to kill, im learnin torture methods,
stick a pin thru this killahs chest in an abnormal forced direction,

^ this was nice 5/10
but not as good as the first one
as direction an method didnt exactly rhyme

You wouldn't have a heart of fire with a flame ta chest
Thats why im killing off SIMS/SYM like im gaming with teks

this was nice the nameplay was done well 7/10
thats all i can say tho

You be sucking mad dick and you house the remnants/
So if you ever kicked flows its cuz ya mouth was pregnant!!/

it was close until that bar 8/10
this was the winner for me
dope punch and multi done well

12/20 - Sym
15/20 - Killah

Vote - Killah

scramble ur guts, small to large, jus why are you so nervous?
prolly cuz ur soft like big titties u only act hard on the surface,

played...tittie punches are not hard hittin anymore... multis were pretty on point though.. 2/5


an i dont necessarily aim to kill, im learnin torture methods,
stick a pin thru this killahs chest in an abnormal forced direction,

this was aiight, good imagery.. 3.5/5

overall: 5.5/10




You wouldn't have a heart of fire with a flame ta chest
Thats why im killing off SIMS/SYM like im gaming with teks

kinda funny, a lil weak, but still was aiight, multis were off a bit..3/5



You be sucking mad dick and you house the remnants/
So if you ever kicked flows its cuz ya mouth was pregnant!!/

multis were good..short n to the point..
3.5/5 for this bar..

overall: 6.5/10

vote: killah

symbolikull-

scramble ur guts, small to large, jus why are you so nervous?
prolly cuz ur soft like big titties u only act hard on the surface,

this was ok..nothing outstanding

an i dont necessarily aim to kill, im learnin torture methods,
stick a pin thru this killahs chest in an abnormal forced direction,

another so-so bar, not much of a punch but a somewhat descriptive torture method -.-




Killah-

You wouldn't have a heart of fire with a flame ta chest
Thats why im killing off SIMS/SYM like im gaming with teks

decent nameplay..rhymescheme fell a bit..pun was ok..

You be sucking mad dick and you house the remnants/
So if you ever kicked flows its cuz ya mouth was pregnant!!/

this was alright..could've been better


vote:killah (slightly outdid symbolikull)

3-0 ko i win good battle

yeah my bad homie i forgot this was due so i copied and pasted some shit...
i apologize for not givin u good competition

good job u better win now

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