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i'm dropping later on..I Haven't forgot about this

WTF i posted my shit the bars didn't go through..SMH .. i'll key something up



[I'll Rip Your Jaw,Spine As I Withdraw Nines, If You Ain't Appalled Fine..]
[Prophets Help Contributing To This Land Slide,Cause All He Bring Is FAULT LINES]

Landslide as in blow out..fault lines as in mistakes...

[He Has Filler, I Continuously Go Foward, Yup I'm Throttling]
[Him Rap? Prophet Elite Or Flow? Nah Cause My Punches Is "Mind Bottling"]

A Liter Flow/Elite Or Flow
get it..I Seal his flow smh

personals-prophet
wordplay-duce
delivery-duce
flow-tie
punch-duce

duce's 1st punch was a lil better than prophets but his second was a monster with that wicked wordplay

vote=duce

No way tha lames raw, the cats? imma take all, step to me u'll see the snake fall!
Coward went 'over his messaging plan', how he doesn't 'text, he jst makes calls!'
(he's made a bunch of callouts recently but hasn't actually battled)


nice personal 6/10
but not really that hard hittin
u cud shrug that off real easy
or flip it quite easily

I'm too hot, get baked dawg,im too dope for him n u blow so no1 expects this ho ta win
N this pussy can clutch guns but they not loaded, so the only hazard in ya sig is the quote from him!
(sig is a german pistol, and he has a quote from hazard in his signature)

this was a bit better with nameplay 8/10
the multies really helped this
but still a bit lame

[I'll Rip Your Jaw,Spine As I Withdraw Nines, If You Ain't Appalled Fine..]
[Prophets Help Contributing To This Land Slide,Cause All He Bring Is FAULT LINES]

this was nice multies 8/10
flowed well all of it
really unique hard hittin shyt

[He Has Filler, I Continuously Go Foward, Yup I'm Throttling]
[Him Rap? Prophet Elite Or Flow? Nah Cause My Punches Is "Mind Bottling"]

this was a bit played 5/10
everybody says about stoppin the flow
at one point or another
one thing was the elite or flow didnt make sense really
i know what it was supposed to be but that line dont make sense

13/20 - Duce
14/20 - Prophet

Vote - Prophet

You're Vote Is Fucked.. And Not Even Cause You Voted For Him

this was a bit better with nameplay 8/10
the multies really helped this
but still a bit lame


You Said that was lame.. with an 8/10 for prophet


this was nice multies 8/10
flowed well all of it
really unique hard hittin shyt

I get the same score, yet my shit is hard hitting? wtf


Nvm..continue voters

it maybe lame but dont mean it aint good

personals-prophet
wordplay-duce
delivery-duce
flow-prophet
punch- duce

vote- duce
this was a good battle but over all i felt that duce took it with ease

No way tha lames raw, the cats? imma take all, step to me u'll see the snake fall!
Coward went 'over his messaging plan', how he doesn't 'text, he jst makes calls!'
(he's made a bunch of callouts recently but hasn't actually battled)


LoL ~ ive actually never seen this concept, so for me, its new, and i liked it, i'd give it a 8/10..ur flow was good and ur multis were on point...


I'm too hot, get baked dawg,im too dope for him n u blow so no1 expects this ho ta win
N this pussy can clutch guns but they not loaded, so the only hazard in ya sig is the quote from him!
(sig is a german pistol, and he has a quote from hazard in his signature)


okay, signature punches are an attempt at a personal, yes..however theyre not very hardhitting cuz theyre indirect and 9/10 times theyre weak.. but umm..this bar started off only ehhhh...flow was off.....ur multis are rhyming with 'quote-from-him'..so u SHOULD have rhymed the word "LOADED" with something, cuz that fucked ur whole flow up... u should have wrote it like this, " An yeah, pussy! u can clutch guns but they aint 'loaded-kid' so the only hazard..." so what i mean?? i coulda added 1 more multi...which makes the bar a LOT better..so i'd give this bar a 6/10




[I'll Rip Your Jaw,Spine As I Withdraw Nines, If You Ain't Appalled Fine..]
[Prophets Help Contributing To This Land Slide,Cause All He Bring Is FAULT LINES]


Okay first mistake, u have "rip your jaw,spine" which equals 4 syllables, and all the rest of them equal 3, so ur flow started off wrong, should said "rip ur jaw-line" or "rip ur jaw,spine" na mean?? but the punch was dope which helped u out a lot... 8.5/10



[He Has Filler, I Continuously Go Foward, Yup I'm Throttling]
[Him Rap? Prophet Elite Or Flow? Nah Cause My Punches Is "Mind Bottling"]



this first line was eeeehhhhhh, not feelin it all that much...
the 2nd line was creative, i had to read ur expo otherwise i would have never have gotten this line... so it was ALMOST a bit stretched, but i liked it..n it was a nice wordplay with mind bottling..

7/10

prophet= 14.0/20
Duce= 15.5/20

winner: DUCE G'luck guys

here i'll use a point system for this one..

prophet-

No way tha lames raw, the cats? imma take all, step to me u'll see the snake fall!
Coward went 'over his messaging plan', how he doesn't 'text, he jst makes calls!'
(he's made a bunch of callouts recently but hasn't actually battled)

decent rhymescheme.. nothing impressive, the text to calls reference was a great personal imo. 7/10

I'm too hot, get baked dawg,im too dope for him n u blow so no1 expects this ho ta win
N this pussy can clutch guns but they not loaded, so the only hazard in ya sig is the quote from him!
(sig is a german pistol, and he has a quote from hazard in his signature)

thought this was a decently good punch, i liked the personal for it, as far as german pistols go..didn't do much for me..rhymescheme was so-so..transition was ok 7/10




duce-

[I'll Rip Your Jaw,Spine As I Withdraw Nines, If You Ain't Appalled Fine..]
[Prophets Help Contributing To This Land Slide,Cause All He Bring Is FAULT LINES]

Landslide as in blow out..fault lines as in mistakes...

rhymescheme was decent, pun was ok, indirect minus the name being said..but decent none the less 7/10

[He Has Filler, I Continuously Go Foward, Yup I'm Throttling]
[Him Rap? Prophet Elite Or Flow? Nah Cause My Punches Is "Mind Bottling"]


crappy rhymescheme -.-, the first line was an obvious filler..which is funny cuz it mentions him having fillers, but it was just..blah.., the second..prophet elite or flow.. i get the wordplay.. but as an actual sentence..its stupid..bad attempt honestly..this could've been so much better in every way ..the concept's overly played out as well..seemed like u tried to hard n it didn't connect..but watever.. 3/10


prophet - 14/20
duce - 10/20


v/ prophet

No way tha lames raw, the cats? imma take all, step to me u'll see the snake fall!
Coward went 'over his messaging plan', how he doesn't 'text, he jst makes calls!'
(he's made a bunch of callouts recently but hasn't actually battled)

lol i liked this, thought it was pretty clever^^^^

I'm too hot, get baked dawg,im too dope for him n u blow so no1 expects this ho ta win
N this pussy can clutch guns but they not loaded, so the only hazard in ya sig is the quote from him!
(sig is a german pistol, and he has a quote from hazard in his signature)

ehhh, i dunno, not really a fan of this one










I'll Rip Your Jaw,Spine As I Withdraw Nines, If You Ain't Appalled Fine..]
[Prophets Help Contributing To This Land Slide,Cause All He Bring Is FAULT LINES]
Landslide as in blow out..fault lines as in mistakes...

favorite punch of the battle, this was pretty nice^^^^^^^^^
it flowed nice n smooth also

[He Has Filler, I Continuously Go Foward, Yup I'm Throttling]
[Him Rap? Prophet Elite Or Flow? Nah Cause My Punches Is "Mind Bottling"]

lol bottling/boggling i dunno, i like the idea behind this one, but yea not a big fan of it


gonna give my vote to duce.. i found prophets lines a little stretched, with less rhymes n less flow, to me the battle was between the first punchline from each verse, n duces was just nice



vote - duce


4 - 2 duces favour

uppin 4 votes

Both Should Justed Posted Their First Lines..

Prophet Wins Due to better Personal Punches
Both First Punches Were Hay's But Proph Had One With a Personal..

Second lines were both Alright.. But again Proph Laced his With a Personal That Stung More..

Vote - Prophet

any body who knows knows i vote fair i ain breakin it down

i vote for prophet due to personals