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4 lines max.

2 punches max.

Direct punches.

Due in 3 days.

CHECKITY CHECK!

damn, forgot about this.... yeah check

yah fuck it, here goes!


WUT UP SCOTTY? This ain’t no beef but … lol

i love Beef ... I'm a Canibal Bandit! a beast in the ring, n Harder than 10 Panals of granite
in yah socks and Sandles you'll Panic! and show you this 'Dogz really a pussy' like Exposing Animal Planet

find yah girl and watch dah Ruge strays Hit-her and a few may split ... curve!
yous a bitch, Herb! and i don't need tah 'Pop rounds' tah have 'Scott Down' like that Bluejay Pitcher (Blue Jay pitcher - Scott Downs)


Respect dude, Good luck

im writing this from my phone, im camping!! n bout the only time i aint gonna be drunk LuL...


Imma Spit Fire Til Ya BURNED TO ASH n Smash Fists In Ya Ribs Til Ya STERNUMS CRACKED..
MURK THIS CAT Then Slice N Dice Ya Spine' Cuz Against Me?...Theres No 'TURNING BACK'!!
You
Should LEARN TO RAP!! Cuz Im His Worse Nightmare So Believe I Got Him WETTING HIS PANTS..
Im CONDEMNING HIS ASS So Ill Blast An 'Iron-Atom' And No Im not Talkin Bout 'CHEMISTRY CLASS'!!


no hate Q!!

i love Beef ... I'm a Canibal Bandit! a beast in the ring, n Harder than 10 Panals of granite
in yah socks and Sandles you'll Panic! and show you this 'Dogz really a pussy' like Exposing Animal Planet
^ These kinda concepts are rlly played to imo. But the flow and multies were right on tho.

find yah girl and watch dah Ruge strays Hit-her and a few may split ... curve!
yous a bitch, Herb! and i don't need tah 'Pop rounds' tah have 'Scott Down' like that Bluejay Pitcher (Blue Jay pitcher - Scott Downs)
Again, multies and flow were dope, the nameplay was nice but the overall punch didn't rlly hit that hard tho

Imma Spit Fire Til Ya BURNED TO ASH n Smash Fists In Ya Ribs Til Ya STERNUMS CRACKED..
MURK THIS CAT Then Slice N Dice Ya Spine' Cuz Against Me?...Theres No 'TURNING BACK'!!
[/b]This concept is kinda played, but I thought the punch was kinda funny, flow was spot on too[/b]
You
Should LEARN TO RAP!! Cuz Im His Worse Nightmare So Believe I Got Him WETTING HIS PANTS..
Im CONDEMNING HIS ASS So Ill Blast An 'Iron-Atom' And No Im not Talkin Bout 'CHEMISTRY CLASS'!!
Dope, the punch was nice, multies were kinda off but i dugg this bar

This was a close one, No1 was rlly direct except Quix's second bar, but the punch didn't rlly hit that hard IMO, u should've put some kinda spin on the punch, and while Scott wasn't direct I thought his punches were better worded, this was a tuffy but Scott gets my vote.

quix:

i love Beef ... I'm a Canibal Bandit! a beast in the ring, n Harder than 10 Panals of granite
in yah socks and Sandles you'll Panic! and show you this 'Dogz really a pussy' like Exposing Animal Planet

i've seen that exact animal planet way too many times..multis were ok..except for that sandles part..kinda random to me

find yah girl and watch dah Ruge strays Hit-her and a few may split ... curve!
yous a bitch, Herb! and i don't need tah 'Pop rounds' tah have 'Scott Down' like that Bluejay Pitcher (Blue Jay pitcher - Scott Downs)

first line was a filler n the multis seemed forced, the second line was decent for nameplay.. pun wasn't that great





scott james:

Imma Spit Fire Til Ya BURNED TO ASH n Smash Fists In Ya Ribs Til Ya STERNUMS CRACKED..
MURK THIS CAT Then Slice N Dice Ya Spine' Cuz Against Me?...Theres No 'TURNING BACK'!!

multis were straight..the punch was decent..a little played but decent none the less

You
Should LEARN TO RAP!! Cuz Im His Worse Nightmare So Believe I Got Him WETTING HIS PANTS..
Im CONDEMNING HIS ASS So Ill Blast An 'Iron-Atom' And No Im not Talkin Bout 'CHEMISTRY CLASS'!!

this was decent.. i didn't find it that great of a punch though


overall vote: scottjames

his was a less forced n had less of a filler, pretty much was just more entertaining

V/ Scott James for a more creative concept,smoother flow, and more effective wording. I'll Elaborate More If Needed.

even tho its already 3-0 i see we're going real weak in the 1st round.

nameplay=quix
multis=scott
originality=tie
flow= scott
punch=quix

nothing rlly spectacular here i think its a tie but majority inches towards scott because of wht hes done in the past i thinks its real funny how people call the "animal planet" punch played but dont say shit about scotts "iron atom" punch....anyways i thought the blue rays pitcher punch was pretty good but scotts multis n flow were also pretty good

vote:draw

its already 3-0 ko tho moving along now

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