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thoughts decrepit, psycho-analyzed but left neglected
there all connected, but split like personalities livin separate
i feel infested, creepy crawlies living inside a question
my new profession, capturing mind state inside a session
brain's compressions, draw the blue prints like architects
fingers spark the text, the next step and the smartest yet
the sharp impress, my words are weapons Tony Stark invents
the darkness prince, crowned by the shadows in the blackness
i live in practice, not an actor but wouldn’t mind an actress
raps not the fastest, but the turtles lappin on the rabbit
im not an addict, but i planned to smoke out the planet
my military tactics, are always on mind when i serve rhymes
I’m sure I’m, contradictive like a symboligist who burns signs
done the first time, the word surgeon stitchin syllables
only by living pivotal, will release the deep and illest known
which fills the dome, to mastered thought thats built of stone

uppin for some feed on this peice here

this is great
i loved the vocab
went with the flow
the deepness sorta complexity shyt
i really think u've come along way from when u started here
this is one of my fav scripts i've fed today
nice piece dude hope u continue to elevate

the darkness prince, crowned by the shadows in the blackness
i live in practice, not an actor but wouldn’t mind an actress
raps not the fastest, but the turtles lappin on the rabbit
im not an addict, but i planned to smoke out the planet

Dope^
keep'em comin

uppin for some more feed