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bottle
Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 1:51 am
by ~Symbolikull~
my first whole track witta hook
Re: bottle
Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 5:19 am
by - Mutual -
the hook aint bad but it aint great
better than i can do
the first verse lyrics was nice
ya flowed the beat well
a lil dim in sum places
also a lil bit choppy sum times
the quality was pretty good
overall a nice song
coulda been better but better than what i'm puttin up so
congrats on that pretty dope shyt
keep'em comin
Re: bottle
Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 4:30 pm
by Lawgix
hook was ass homie... was that already on the beat???? wtf??? lol dude we'll have to get together n do another one homie!!! when i get back home dude its on!!!!
Re: bottle
Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 3:45 pm
by TreTru
beat's pretty sik.
uhh oh that hook is off timing ...
first verse has some good flo lycs are str8
nd hooks too ..
2nd verse started off a lil shaky but ya pik it back up ..
probly wanna work on that..but
3rd hooks better..
3rd verse lyrically sounded above the rest..IMO
not bad dawg..keep it goin...