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early mondays

Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 2:39 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
im so illy really like t.i. how ima stand up guy,
a rider, a g, a young buck how i got ur hands up high,
bust a rhyme, then the flipmodes so give me some more,
ima hot boy, chillin wit b.g. watch me kick in ur door,
its 3 am n im still feelin shady ina slaughtered place,
sicker than r. kelly is ima piss on ur daughters face,
never waistin paper but like jz i still master a rhyme,
cuttin the locks out like jadakiss now u askin me why?
common sense tells u im common in the use of mind control,
smoke so much dro im wit snoop dogg on pine patrol,
got units of gorillas makin dollars stackin like lloyd banks,
spittin so heartless from the mid-west ill make Illinois shake,

Re: early mondays

Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 3:30 pm
by TheBigHurt~
the jay z line was hillarious man, i like it

Re: early mondays

Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 9:53 am
by Haz
This Was Cool..
It Was Kind Of Shakey
I See U Were Tryna Come Off Creative..
Some Line's Were Predictable..
Could Of Been Alot Longer..

Anyway's Cool Snippet..

Keep Droppin

Re: early mondays

Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 9:33 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
nice, i liked this, was koo that u used titles and album names with the artists kept the consistency, not the usual rhymescheme from u but definitely a nice drop