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Here's a snippet to one of my new tracks, could someone leave feed on quality and what I need to do to improve it, but all feed is welcome, appreciate it...


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nice beat
ya lyrics were good
the quality wasnt great
it was like mine
which is prolly why i found to be quite good
nice hook at the end
harmonised
keep'em comin

Appreciate the feed

nice chill track, sounded allright could of refined the vocals better but overall a chill track

cool track...i like ya laid back style..

uhh the singin on the track needs polishing..

umm the vocals sound alright..compressing them would make them pop out a lil more...i dont know what you got or what you use so it's difficult to diagnose...

all in all this sounds like a good radio track..1