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True story...
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[Verse 1]
When I was twelve, I sold my soul to the devil
So he'd take my rhyming skills, to a whole nother level
We met up, came in close contact
Made a strong pact, and signed a blood oath contract
Said he gave up on metal bands, and televangelists
And I'm the better candidate to be the devil's advocate
He told me deliver evidence of the truth
And send the proof, through subliminal messages to the youth
So I agreed to share it, and bare it to those who need to hear it
Through evil spirits, that subconsciously feed me lyrics
I black out, and let 'em take control of the pen
Then I snap out, and do the shit all over again
Till I look down at the page, and the verse is complete
And the words I disperse on the sheet'll release a curse on the beat
So when a kid shoots up his school, and murders half his class
He probably did it after he heard one of my raps

[Chorus]
I sold my soul to the devil, at the age of twelve
Sealed my fate and fell, straight to the gates of hell
Became the devil’s advocate inside Satan’s realm
Now you can’t kill me, I can take a shell
I sold my soul to the devil, at the age of twelve
Sealed my fate and fell, straight to the gates of hell
Became the devil’s advocate inside Satan’s realm
It’ll be a cold day in hell the day you break the spell

[Verse 2]
I came to Satan's layer through the stone and rubble
He said I paid half price, in a past life, and I owed him double
I said that's not the agreement I signed with
He pulled out the contract, magnified it, and showed me the fine print
I chose not to pay, went to leave, but he blocked the way
Tried to escape, through his fiery lake, but he locked the gate
And said if I tried to walk away, I'd get cut in half
Feel his wrath, and spend an eternity in a bloody bath
I laughed and said he could hardly harm me, then he called his
Fallen Angels, from all the angles, and sicked his army on me
I fought 'em off me with witch force, scorched the devil with a lit torch
Then butt fucked him with his pitch fork
Tore his horns off his head/ Sat on the triple six throne
And watched my skin tone, morph into red
Became the new devil in Hell, now who can stop me?
When I resurrect myself on earth, in a human body

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]
My re-birth, was re-hearsed, I was born in re-verse
Feet first, the worst breed to breathe, an evil seed, cursed
I reassured, that my return, would reoccur
The fetus burst, and came out 8 months premature
I’m pure evil, I live just to hurt people
I talked a nun into hanging herself off the church steeple
I was born dead, with four heads, the first time
I got blessed with holy water, the shit burned my foreheads
My birth mother left me on a stranger’s door step
They took me in at mornin’, and I killed ‘em before bed
I told the priest what I did to my last victim
Later he found me, and tried to drown me at my baptism
I passed the hours, mastering my satanic powers
Caused acid showers, natural disasters and crashed the towers
A heart of violence, scientists saw the stars alignin’
For several years, the devil’s here, and he started rhymin'

-Thunder Sound-

damm damm this is dope
the lyrics were deep shyt
the multies and imagery was off the hook
the flow was direct i could feel it
alotta feeling in this joint
the hook i sense a rhythm to when i read it
this would be complete fire on a track yo
keep'em comin deffo

dope! cant really criticise anything here. think i liked the 3rd verse the best. lines like this killed it

I told the priest what I did to my last victim
Later he found me, and tried to drown me at my baptism

like i said it was dope. your the best writer droppin at the moment by a mile. props

This Was Good ..
I Liked The Whole 'Devils Son' Concept Bein Used In Your Piece..
You Should Of Made More Dialoge.. It Woulda Spiced Things Up a Bit
In Places It Was a Bit Dull

I Liked The Line Cee Pointed Out.

My re-birth, was re-hearsed, I was born in re-verse
Feet first, the worst breed to breathe, an evil seed, cursed
I reassured, that my return, would reoccur
The fetus burst, and came out 8 months premature

You Got That Mixed Up Which Made Me Like Huh...
You Might Of Done It On Purpose Though
Anyway's Good Shit Homie..
I Liked The Inner Rhymes N Multi's...
This was a Good Piece..
Keep Droppin

Everything you make is fire man.. seriously...

Yo dope verses phasewon, you crack lyricist!! Loved the whole freestyle but verse 1 was the best..

- NoVeL

thanks for the feed, yall. much appreciated, make sure you hit me back with a link up to one of your joints so I can RTF.

no point in quotin,ppl said most of it,anyways good shit son. ur flow was pretty fuckin solid through-out. keep that shit up.

Great, flow and lyrics were dope as hell...
Wasn't really feeling the second verse though...