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Its that damn man of letters but no teller of tales/
dancin man of death but here this fella prevails/
in the cellars of hell - i dwell here on my jack jones/
spittin all this grit n shit - filtered through my cracked tones/
snap bones of rap clones - where did the real go?/
hardest of artist singin songs - i cant feel those/
i walk in the moonlight, the shadows of midnight/
im lowkey - like a smuggled blade in a fist fight/
in this life a renegade - the dawn of a new age/
move safe - know that you can never make me lose face/
true ace - shoot straight - manors gettin ripped apart/
steppin on a broken path some man have got a wicked heart/
the sickest darts i ever spit - hungry like a rabid beast/
rewind every line i unleash with this rapid speech/
lack of sleep blurrin up the borders - fact or fiction/
eternity - poetically - is feeding this addiction.....

all feed appreciated and will be returned.1.

cant rap for shit

lol as opposed to you?
or just in general?

lol fag........

Nice drop, wordplay & structure was in place!!
Its good dude, But curious 2 C more of this..

move safe - know that you can never make me lose face/
true ace - shoot straight - manors gettin ripped apart/
steppin on a broken path some man have got a wicked heart/
the sickest darts i ever spit -

- NoVeL

another dope verse, although not quite up to par with some of your other joints I've seen, this seemed more rushed on the spot type shit, but fundamentally it was still on point in every aspect, good shit.

good looking out phase and novel....yeah its nothin spectacular just something i keyed up bored..........1.

walk in the moonlight, the shadows of midnight/
im lowkey - like a smuggled blade in a fist fight/
in this life a renegade - the dawn of a new age/
move safe - know that you can never make me lose face/
true ace - shoot straight - manors gettin ripped apart/
steppin on a broken path some man have got a wicked heart/
the sickest darts i ever spit - hungry like a rabid beast/
rewind every line i unleash with this rapid speech/


I Liked That..

The First Bar Of That Was Real Dope In My Opinion..

Keep Droppin Homie