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10 Lines/5 Bars
First to 5 votes
3-0 = KO
explained votes only, break them down by categories

Check

Check, drop whenever homie I won't take long at all.

I dropped first, since this pussy is worse, who put us verse you getting ko'd with a keyed verse,
you probably ghost write for Fred Durst, bitch I just snatched your purse, left you 17 cash I felt bad since you cursed,
teflon is a coating on cooking utensils, your writs are wasting lead in your pencils,
still getting trampled, with a freestyle sample, put that gat to you temple, damn this pussy in menstrual,
cause he text type, like a femcee being a transvestite, is just rotten luck, left with 17 bucks even on the net now you broke as fuck,
teflon with a strap on likes to crew fuck, I know it's wrong, but this won't take long, your writtens truly do suck,
in NY on the streets you would just get beat up, with your rap game, along with your lame name,
only way you can get fame, is working at micro-soft on comedy central rapping rocking a plastic chain,
let me find out mane canibus your idol, since you have no wins this battle I can't take your title,
word of advice to rap poetry is vital, start reading the Bible, check the scriptures section I drop like a
disciple,

bar 1 - he only has 13 cash
bar 2 - dictionary definition of teflon
his avatar has a gun
bar 4 - his avatar NY hat
company micro-soft and his microphone is soft
bar 5 - canibus in his profile

A message to anyone concerning, Burn me? with those whack lines
How? when his words are played more than Jimmy V speeches during Dec 3-9...
I make you a laughin' stock kid you're nothing suck my cock
So shook, in my room at the comp and feel the aftershock!
Brawl with a Vet, I'll get my claws on a pen and it's off with his head
So if ya running your mouth you're gettin fucked like talkative sex!!
I'm locked and loaded! Ready with clips to leave a hole in his chest and his ribs
Im'a leave a gap in his front Bigger than Letterman's is
Yes im rapping to diss you! Ya won't get personal like attatch-ment issues
I'll spray this faggot it's sad but it's true, kid you couldn't use the magnum since the average fits you!!


Votes now

-- Mon Apr 27, 2009 9:02 am --

Can we get some votes I mean we're the only battle on here besides mine against Hazard so let's vote fellas.

kahula - ur verse lacked in every category... no hate, but it really did, ur attempts @ personals were very weak and not great...lul..


tef - Brawl with a Vet, I'll get my claws on a pen and it's off with his head
So if ya running your mouth you're gettin fucked like talkative sex!!
I'm locked and loaded! Ready with clips to leave a hole in his chest and his ribs
Im'a leave a gap in his front Bigger than Letterman's is


those 4 lines won this entire battle... better punches/multis/flow/wordplay...

u just need to incorporate some nameplays man... these universal punches will only work against opponents who arent that good...


vote: tef

expected..kahlua just needs more practice

tef won this by a cat sweep...i'd explain it...but..there's not much to explain, kahlua u did have personals but ur verse had a really basic rhymescheme, and teflon's just more creative with it

lmfao

not another hazbeen...

Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Basic Catsweep For Teflon
Except Flow
Kahula U need Work..

Vote - Tef

that's a k.o., 3-0, teflon wins, -updated and closed-