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tracks make fans vomit, when bad rap is on it
today more fiction depicted than spiderman comics
niggas keep smoking exotics, all strains of rare chronic,
getting lifted with whom they spit with till their careers comet,
like sticky from onyx, i was born pro never novice,
kept writing mind bright like lightning, homey just keeping it honest,
without east coast ebonix, come from the land of the promised,
soon to own the rap throne as foretold by nostradamus,
im a stay writing sonnets, releasing masterpieces,
killing tracks not looking back, superceding new releases,
my mind adapts, thoughts in tact, ripping random beats to pieces,
verse strapped, always attack, using my poetic thesis,
hard to believe this, like needs for immigrant visas,
im a sell units like reeses, more than illegal search and seisures,
every record label needs this, for my skills i thank jesus
im a write rhymes, past my life time, till the day the sun freezes

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i will drop a written piece later, 1

nice flow and i liked the inner and outer rhymeschemeniggas keep

smoking exotics, all strains of rare chronic,
getting lifted with whom they spit with till their careers comet.

^^nice execution, loved the rhymescheme on the second bar here.

keep droppin.
.1.