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E- Bortion

Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 6:53 am
by eMCee Havic
I knew this guy Danny with many different habits
He smoked weed an drank but mostly was a thiz addict
in his attic he rolled balls and thought he was charismatic
not knowin the mixed drug tablets can cause damage
he followed his habit and ate 20 or more pills a week
chewin his cheeks pupils spinning as he walked the streets
everyone he meets can tell hes fuckin out of it
hes fallin off as he moves through life never doubting shit
thinks he wont amount to shit as he downs his thiz
fried out of his mind train puffin cancer sticks
but danny didn’t know the whole time he was on roll
holes were drillin in his skull as the pills expose
danny to lose his goals and so the story goes on
purp mac dres batmans and budha in tons spending his funds
til they were gone than he pawned all his possessions
and threw a thiz session and never learned his lesson
at the party in question he put 12 too many into digestion
he started wigging out laying on the couch lookin epileptic
lookin septic spasming lookin like he was electric
I wonder if he was offended when no one came to the rescue
He pressed doom and no one knew until the next noon
So next time the E press you think of danny’s misfortune
Fore you thiz snortin give your brain a quick coarse in
Becoming an idiot or dead by performin an E bortion

Re: E- Bortion

Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 9:09 am
by Ambiguous Realm
intro n outro were decent, the middle was ok at best, overall decent drop, who's danny? ol danny boy? keep droppin

Re: E- Bortion

Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 12:08 am
by eMCee Havic
thanks for the feed, yeah i noticed the repetition too, but its all gravy. still uppin on some more feedback