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8 bar battle
First to 3 explained votes wins
You already know not to bite
MUST post "respect" after opponents verse
verses must drop within a week after opponent drops

-- Tue Apr 21, 2009 12:47 pm --

we good?

CHECK !! ..

check imma drop in a bit

-- Wed Apr 22, 2009 12:34 pm --

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This from the JAILS N BASEMENTS scopin Haze's FRAILEST STATEMENTS rydin death 'till the RAILS IS SHAKIN 'notha victim shipped off leave 'em SAILIN FACELESS Rhymes straight sedate Linez to MAILED REMAINS 'N

This catz TIME IS OVA explains why his LINES IS BROKEN stepped up to get his PRIDE DESTROYED 'N The dirty 30 RYDE WITH NOISE 'N the 5 IS STORED beneath palms until THIGHS IS OPENED

LIFE IS STOLEN Hazard's death a LIVE RECORDIN' Illest here to fear show of you BOXED N SORTED

This here is a hardcore FIGHT SO NIGGAZ WATCHIN......hollow Tips Solvin Ya Brainz MY TRIGGAZ LOCKED 'N leave and let the docs jigsaw ya remains ya flesh left from ya body like LIPO, GET IT POPPIN

NIGGAZ WILL ACT OUT online wont get it smackin fuck punches lyricals crack like minal crab sticks Haz LYRICS HALF LOUD mines on some otha shit clap fifths repeated till ya LIGAMENTS TAPP OUT

prone to PERPETUAL SQUEEZIN' aimed nice leave dudes TESTIKALS BREATHIN' rhymes leave his LETTERS DECEASED N' turned a Hazard to a CHEMICAL BLEEDIN leavin scripts needin MEDICAL TREATMENTS git it smackin

Aight finally something to vote on!!!


Hazard:

I'ma Have This JERK PIN'D He's Breezeliss On The Moon Expectin a FIRST WIN,He Got 1 Shot..
Well i Got TWENTY FOR SEVEN Like How Often The EARTH SPINS (BRAAAT!)
*haha not a bad opener good nameplay*

He Go's To Tranny Slut's Fa Sex His Wife Aint Bust Um Yet..But She'll Bust His Mouth Cus None Of His Nut's Is Left..
Betta Rush From Death Cus Only Way Ya 'Writtens Are Bold' You Usin CUSTOM TEXT!!..
*aight not bad*

I'ma Heavy Hitta Like First Time Smokers You Takin 'Light Steps' U Can Throw Punches But Can't Fight Death
Who Gave This Herb a Shot?? 4 Him Heaven Reserved A Spot So I'ma 'Send 7 Up' Like SORRY There Aint No SPRITE LEFT!!
*liked the wordplay, punch didn't hit as hard, like the setup line also*

Don't Enter The Tourney Cause U'll Be WASTIN TEXT.. Niggas'll Leave U 'Stuck On Da Bottom' Like Fuckin Pussy Durin Double PENETRATION SEX!!
U Calld Out Jay? Why U FACIN VET'S?? Soon You'll Need 'Support 2 Stay Up' Like HATIAN BREASTS!
*lol not bad somewhat a nice personal*

My Force Is Rapid i'll Torch Ya Maggit Leave Pieces Of ya Corpse In Bagg's Kid..With No Remorse For Tatics
Of Course Da Faggit Is Always 'Strivin To Die' But Only Suicidal Rings SUPPORT HIS HABIT!!..
*lol nice closer*


Seven 30:

This from the JAILS N BASEMENTS scopin Haze's FRAILEST STATEMENTS rydin death 'till the RAILS IS SHAKIN 'notha victim shipped off leave 'em SAILIN FACELESS Rhymes straight sedate Linez to MAILED REMAINS 'N
*nice wordplay, don't like ur style hard read imo dragged out lines, this was ok*

This catz TIME IS OVA explains why his LINES IS BROKEN stepped up to get his PRIDE DESTROYED 'N The dirty 30 RYDE WITH NOISE 'N the 5 IS STORED beneath palms until THIGHS IS OPENED
*ehhh*

LIFE IS STOLEN Hazard's death a LIVE RECORDIN' Illest here to fear show of you BOXED N SORTED
*lost track of ur structure, is this the bar i mean two lines equals 1 bar so wheres the rest?, wordplay is cool but missing something*

This here is a hardcore FIGHT SO NIGGAZ WATCHIN......hollow Tips Solvin Ya Brainz MY TRIGGAZ LOCKED 'N leave and let the docs jigsaw ya remains ya flesh left from ya body like LIPO, GET IT POPPIN
*again wordplay is on point, multis, but the punch just not hitting hard*

NIGGAZ WILL ACT OUT online wont get it smackin fuck punches lyricals crack like minal crab sticks Haz LYRICS HALF LOUD mines on some otha shit clap fifths repeated till ya LIGAMENTS TAPP OUT
*Again ur structure is sloppy it doesn't rhyme right or read right*

prone to PERPETUAL SQUEEZIN' aimed nice leave dudes TESTIKALS BREATHIN' rhymes leave his LETTERS DECEASED N' turned a Hazard to a CHEMICAL BLEEDIN leavin scripts needin MEDICAL TREATMENTS git it smackin
*i guess one of ur better lines, still not hard hitting at all*


Seven 30, you need a lot of work first on ur structure ur style is ur style but thats not even a style I'm lost reading it..Not sure the set up lines then the punches, then adding those little phrases after the punch for instance ur last line the *git it smackin* is just filler no need. Also the lipo line with the *getting poppin* again filler...work on ur structure everything will come after that, start there first tho...


Hazard: didn't even want to vote for ur ass sick of you haha nah im playing but I was hoping Seven 30 would take this from you, but nah you had a nice verse maybe 1-2 bars wasn't feeling, everything else was on point punches hit nice, and everything else was there...Landlside

Vote= Hazard

1-0 upping for votes, -battle records put back for hazard and seven-

Punches: Haz easily, he had some clever and humorous punches, 30 kinda had no punches, it was just a verse full of multies and gun talk.

Flow: Both had a good flow, but since seven30's verse was all multies it flowed better.

Personals: Hazard, seven 30's verse was mostly inderect. Haz used some nameplay and had some personals.

Multies: seven 30

Wordplay: The majority of Haz's verse was ill with the wordplay so he wins this cat.

Vote: Hazard, just had the overall better verse. Seven 30, u should be more direct instead of dropping verses with no actual punchlines.

punches- haz
multis- seven
entertainment- haz
flow-seven
personals-haz


vote- haz

illest line

" I'ma Have This JERK PIN'D He's Breezeliss On The Moon Expectin a FIRST WIN,He Got 1 Shot..
Well i Got TWENTY FOR SEVEN Like How Often The EARTH SPINS"

Told ya i'd Make You Famous ..

3-0 hazard wins -closed and updated-