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i move with swiftness leave none to witness
the sickest spittin writtens or unwrittens
my religions forbidden hidden from the common people
considered evil deceitfull deadly and leathal
not a sequel no equal, to the rhymes that i bust
i combust with robust conduct i was fucked over
since the birth of the christian church called the worst
thing on the curve which merged with the devil
with several federal governments tryin to cover it
smother it with lies and proof that the roots
reach through the few the choose to fuel their minds
with rhymes ahead of their times whose only crime
was tryin to find a hind sight to their blind life
and only find strife in the lime lights flashin
contraptions and factions buildin a force to be reckond wit
next second its, on like the sesson is most neglegent
dont kno who your messin wit, pullin rhythm out a flat sound
so back down this rap sound will beat you in the last round

feed plez all the time i got thanx

ill shit, multies, flow, structure, message, everything was on point, a couple lines were just on some rambling shit, but were still worded nicely. dope verse, especially for a key.

hit me back with some feed if you get a chance:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/celeb ... 12920.html