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I miss You

Its a shame what we go through,
EveryDay i wanna hold you,
Screamin out loud to the point till i turn blue.

But nothing else matters except me and you
that's why i poet to the fullest whenever i write you,
and one day i'll ignite you, shooting the stars out the skies until i could wife you.

and its not cause i like you that i wanna do this, but your amazin and got these other girls clueless. And your the type i wanna be involved with, cause other women are just merry-go-rounds your being got the whole world just revolving.

Basically what im really trying to say,
i miss you and im waiting for you to come home on
a sunday, maybe one day, until then we could kick it.
you got me into soul food cause your thighs got me going for that part on a chicken, your delicious and.......


I LOVE YOU Lady
Luck lol

upon feed

This was ok ..
Wasn't 2 Great...
Real Repetitive Rhymes Used...
No Real Structure , Could Of Been Alot More Creative..
But This Was Cool To Make U Go 'Awww" I Guess Lol...

Anyways Drop Some Of Ur Stuff?...

This Was Straight ..

so is this something your man actually wrote you? or were you writing it from the prespective of your man? either way it was obviously more poetic than straight lyrical rap shit, which is cool, the rhyming could have been a lil more complex, seemed like it was rushed, just some on the spot shit(tell the 'hubster' to step his game up) lol but overall in a poetic way this shit was aight, nothin' ill yet nothin' bad, cool shit.

Baby you actually wrote my shit online??
(Lmfao) I was only 15 then!!

You need 2 take dat off like me bout 2 get in dem draws,
you know da cause
we was listenin 2 baby makin music, R. Kelly "Ignition"
now we got a baby on da way thanks alot to the kissin'
huggin & rubbin
remember when we was in da bronx, up in da tub fuckin?
You call yourself "Lady Luck" when it should be "Lady Luvin"!!
I Love You & just 2 keep it public, you always
keep it ^ like the arrow on the elevator button.

- "True Story"

u had 2 go and put me ou there like that lol boy u made me lol so hard the baby kicked