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You're a faggot from Seattle, telling me I'm gay but ain't got heart 2 battle

I'll stay simplistic, let's be realistic, If I was gay I would've blown your mic away, along time ago

(No HOMO)

Thinking of statistics, your rhyming's weak but I remain sadistic

Fucking pessimistic, flow vibes 'positive' like speech optimistic s

Go choke on a Mystic or Gatorade,

I'll laugh, and wave away your diss 2 me

would never be a 'Good shot' like Scottie Pippen's fade away

lmao...........erm..yeah...lol

normally think yah nice....but this...


NoVeL stay SIMPLISTIC, let's be REALISTIC
If I waz gay I would blown your mic away, along time ago


this IS homo!! no hate doggy, butyah might wanna stay away from the "if i was gay" lines



other than that, Not horrible.


But Scotty WOULD eat that then floss with your intestines Fam!

Your a Good Hype Man Quix

and your a good Dick Eater ^^^ ... you ride my nutz harder than your mom ans sister do ^

*yawnz*.......really?

didnt get the rhyme scheme on this ..
more twisted than something yours truly would right.

this shit was straight, I picked up the rhyme scheme just fine, although the flow appears to be choppy based on the structure and how it was typed up, but I could tell it would sound ill if you actually spit it. it fell off at the end, but the rhyming aspect was on point up until then, in a diss just try to work on humerous lines, I battle in real life and it's all about clowning on the opponent, funny shit wins people over, the objective is to be entertaining, cause ultimately it's third party prespective who determins the winner of a battle, even though this was just a 'diss', but you should still focus on humiliating your opponent. but this shit was on point with the rhyming factor for the most part, stay at it.

I really didnt spend no time on this drop. It didnt make sense 2 sum 1 who wasnt gonna drop in a battle so I just wrote a diss, it was kinda 2 respond 2
ScooterJames (ScottJames) Pussy sh*t. However Phasewon I did read your response & yeah I did write it like I was spittin it live, thanks all of you for your feed bcuz this will make me a better emcee.

- NoVeL

^no doubt kid, you should always write your shit to spit it, it defeats the purpose to me if you write some dope shit but couldn't actually spit it in real life, it's basically pointless then. don't fall into the 'textcee' trap, stay doin' you and just keep elevating.

expected more....not really, nice try though..i guess

LuL... he called me scooter... LUL!!!

it was ok man. i kinda picked up the flow

The captaled words kinda ruined it