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Haz
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Post by Haz »

This Is Like A Minute 12 Seconds..
Waitin For 2 People 2 Jump On It..
Or i'll Just Take The Whole Joint..
Anyways..
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Post by Dead Silence »

liked the lyrics alot
it was decent
i didnt like the beat tho
it was weird imo just wasnt feeling it
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Post by TreTru »

haha..shyts lyrically pretty nice..fam..ya deliv's gettin better too


def..finish it up i'd like to hear that shyt..haha...1
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Post by Kurse »

Yea dawg, this is definately sumthin you should finish up and release as a whole thing. Sounds like sumthin that would make a good intro for a mixxtape or street album. So finish it up and keep it, it's good demo material.
Beat with the fast violins def goes hard.
Good lines...solid beat...too short.
With the exception of the length, the shit is far nice.
Good drop bruh.
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Post by Haz »

Thanks 4 The Feed You Guys ..
I Got All You With Feed...
And Yeah Kurse That's a Good Ideal..
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

i Really Wasn`t Feelin` Tha Beat ..
But U Stepped Up Lyrically & Delivery Wise ..
U Gettin` alot Better, Start Rippin Heads Off Now
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.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Brah-Vo »

definately feelin it! props.
Ya flow was dope and lyrically it was fire.
finish this off bruh.
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Post by мєтαρнуѕιкz »

ill yo
Why The fuck You Squintin You Tryin To Shoot That cAMera Before It Snapshotz Your Hamburger Head??
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Post by complexity »

I actually wrote this verse.

jk!

Props on this one.
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Post by HKX »

u need 2 make dis a whole track son shit would come out nice if dis is done holla at me when its done actually lol
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Post by Petrafyne »

Prolly The Best I Heard You, Nothin Wrong With It Just Do Better And Better Is All I Can Say.
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