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Dghost VS Quix(Quix Wins Due To K.O.)
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 4:15 am
by Quix
5 barz
no biting, feeding, etc!
check and post your verse!
this is mah check!
5 bars???? Well fuck it
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 12:14 pm
by Dghost
Real life Gutta?? Check his FILES IN COURT//
Only record dude has is Six cases of CHILD SUPPORT//
So dont start TALKING CRAZY, cuz only thing you ever beat was your dick to MARSHA BRADY since you was an AKWARD BABY//
Plus you BROKE, BITCH, TRICK, I get TWICE YOUR CHECK--MULTIPIED by RESPECT//
Your bout to get SMOKE QUICK, QUIX, last time you seen a gun was when you was robbed for the ICE ON YO NECK--BY A CADET//
Man I dunno what to say, but I dont even feel like talking, youll just vote when its all said and done.
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 11:07 pm
by Quix
HAHA THATS IT???????
OK
yup, yah Bizoy iz bizack!!
come one, come all watch me ERASE THIS DWEB; he weak and will never stand in PLACE OF ME
SAVE FACE AND FLEA! cuz i ain't 'Giving away Weed' when i say i'm Bout tah WAISTE A D
DG a snitch, he likes tah PLAY POLICE! yah forced multis are Straight PLAYED, NOT POTENT!
mah shits dope, and i ain't 'Forcing a thing' cuz i'm the 'Lord of the Ring' like J.R TOLKEN
you ain't REALL...yous a Fucking ACTOR, WEAK FOOL won't bust a GAT OR BEAT DUDES
plus your RAPS ARE PRE-SCHOOL so watch me 'Eat up Host' like CATHOLIC PEOPLE
you depend on Fagz, i'm RELYING ON CHROME you prolly accesorizing DESIGNING THEM HOMEZ
so when WE FIND YOU ALONE! watch me 'Spray D.G' like APPLYING COLOGNE
i'm a beast, you a pussy thats BARELY SEEN a fucking pussy ass FERRY, SEEN?!?!?!!
I'm RARELY WEAK! And Folkz only see 'D in front of Q' at DAIRY QUEEN
Whoa, Murdered dog...sorry! i should get me a lawyer.
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 12:34 am
by Logic
so when WE FIND YOU ALONE! watch me 'Spray D.G' like APPLYING COLOGNE
literally the only line that stood out for me
the rest was all aimless wordplay and pointless capital letters..
D ghost..your flow was off..tried to whack multis in there but the verse didnt flow..looked like you had written 6 seperate lines and stuck em together
not one personal
So dont start TALKING CRAZY, cuz only thing you ever beat was your dick to MARSHA BRADY
this was your best line..and it was PLAYED as fuck!!
concentrate on writing proper verses, not just random lines with multis thinking it flows, cos it dont..and concentrate on punches and nameplay instead of meaningless wordplay..and loose the capital letters..they just make your verse look amateur!
Quix..found it really hard to follow your verse..try to lay it out in an easier fashion like line by line so its easier on the eye and easier for voters..your flow was alright in places..had wayy stretched bars in places like that tolkien line.
your best line was that cologne line..pretty original..the D in front of Q line was whack as fuck though..concentrate on hittin him with harder personals than that..a lot of your verse was also full of pointless wordplay that didnt really hit hard
anyway vote goes to Quix..Dghost had the flow and structure..but Quix came with the only good line of the battle so.
vote-Quix
peace
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 1:40 am
by Haz
Punchlines : Quix
Flow : Both?
Wordplay : Quix..
Personals : Quix ( D 'Q Attempt)
Multis : QUix
Both Could Of Came Waaaay Better..
Quix Got This One Though..
Overall Vote : Quix
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 3:54 am
by K KiLLaH
Punchlines-Quix
Flow-Quix (Dghost had a nice flow but completley fucked it up with that marsha brady punch)
Wordplay-Quix
Personals-Quix
Multis-Quix
Overall-Quix
Brief-DG i think you have skills but you completely slacked off against quix you def coulda came a lot harder and im sure you had the ability to~1
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 4:39 am
by Quix
3-0 k.o FOR QUIX
Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 12:16 am
by Haz
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