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Watsgoood yall.. dis is a lil horror type joint i did. got charlie manson on da intro (one of his earlier prison interviews) tho da beats pretty basic. n e way lemme kno wat yall think. onelove!
~SolQet

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aahhh the goody bag line was fiyahh!! sickness

loved the sampled intro..nice simple beat was cool too..i preferred your flow on the first verse i felt it was a lil off in places on your second though. But really..tighten that up and the whole thing will be sounding amazing as your first couple of lines showed you really know how to ride a beat

Content was good..i was feeling a lot of the concepts you brought out there..imo it was a little inconsistant in places though..some lines jumped out at me like woahh! some i felt were really average

'reality is fantasy but truth becomes lies' - profound shit!

'im the devil and im here to do his work' - lil contradictory

runaway train line was sickkk!!! twisted brain shit..yeah!!

can you sing? i get the feeling a sung hook on this track would really work..

overall really enjoyed it! keep doing your thing peace

thanks fo the feed Logic. yeah actually "I am the devil and im here to do the devils work" Charles "Tex" Watson said to the tates before he killed them, he admitted at his trial. so dats why i threw dat line in there. but thanks fo tha positives!

~SolQet

So im Guessing it Was ur intention To Name This After Richard Ramirez?

cool i like the intro..

the beat is sick IMO..repetative a bit but still tight..

i agree with logic ..about likin the flo on first verse better..
but both were good ..good licks all the way through..

not bad your delivery came up alot already major props boo..niice..

all in all i really liked this one cause the creativity in the concept..
i like your concepts you tend to tweak concepts well..

N.E.way good shyt B..HOTT

Domino, naw i named da song "night stalker" cause of da line in da hook "night stalker like charlie manson".. although i do realize the connection lol.
~Tru, i knoww da beats so simple i almos didnt use it but i loved da intro n thought of dis killa concept so i was jus like, hey! haha.. i like da first verse better too, lyrically and da flow. i might tweak it in tha future. but again thanx fo tha feed!
onelove

~SolQet

Lol Richard Ramirez Was The Night Stalker, That Was His Nickname. (it Came About Because The Song 'Night Prowler' By AC/DC Supposedly influenced Him, Who Knows Maybe You'll influence Someone To Kill People With This Track).

Also He Was 10x More Badass Than Manson.