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yo. any rule you wanna set up. i'm good with any amount of lines but i'd prefer 20 bars

Fine...20 is good....due in 24 hours from now....

crim-son is in some deep trouble, like veins containing air bubbles
I go after red like a bull, charging full, I pull ,mountains down to rubble.
I'm a lone stampede, I'm a grown man see, and you know your on-ly
A phony and a crony, to some homie who probably owe me, money
I'm not just a cash rapper, i crush trash rappers like a compactor
construct bars like a contractor, but your raps collapse like a shack after
an atomic blaster, I'm ya master get it? don't sweat it, cuz that won't aid
I'm taler made to fillet like a blade, when i spit my rhymes split cuz my teeth are serade-
ed, just remain dead, decapitated and lacerated, and the nurse is absent baby.
take a nap because that's a wrap. I attack like a constrictor, i'll make you endangered
with the major infliction of force, restricting your "flow" of sorts
first blood flow and that'll make ya mind go ______, and that'll make ya rhymes go ______
that's a flatline, i know that was a phat line, i wrote this in the snack line
at the buffet spot, on the day of your service near your funeral plot
I C you with an IV, and I M D #1 like roman numerals pops
I am king, I'm Ceaser, I'm a kaiser I'm a czar I'm the best up by far
you couldn't catch up by car, bullet train or jet plane, I mean
you fold like paper and i transform like star scream, i roll out and doll out
more lethal lines than you could count, even if you were blue ranger billy
i could spit one lil' bar and you would call it a millie.

Superior huh?.....we'll see..

My INTROS LIKE a TEMPLE STRIKE from KIMBO SLICE// & his verse just set the 'bar low', but i'd still manage to LIMBO TWICE!! /a SIMPLE FIGHT, But this KIDS FRONTIN, ain't KILLED NOTHIN/ its like the Shaq trade, even if I took the 'heat' off his chest i'd still SUN(son) 'EM// yeah I was POISED TO SMOKE 'EM/ but I'm kinda pissed at the site now so let's VOID THE JOKING/ I made an open call & ya sent the 'super' up?, ...what, is the TOILET BROKEN??/




He wants SUPERSTARDOM?, well I'm in the MOOD TO BARGAIN/ let's make 'em famous, the 1st faggot I roast here & REDUCED TO CARBON/ Wait, let's DEDUCE YA JARGON, superior?, what could cause ya rep to TARNISH WORSE?/ the false screen name or the GARBAGE VERSE?/ lol, well the truth in LOGIC HURTS, but the good news, ya career could NEVER stall....it woulda have to got STARTED FIRST/



Crimsons still breathing, so hip hop CAN'T BE DEAD/fuck ANGRY THREADS, I'm in a hubris mood as I GENTLY TREAD/ he seen my verse & shit his thighs, I just chuckled.... 'do the STANKY LEG'/& I'm cold deadly, who'd rush to push me? No one!, EXACTLY FAG./ya flows heavy?, then this pussy I'll GLADLY STAB & build his coffin with MAXI PADS/



GrimmREAPER ON THE MIC & he ain't never seen a CREATURE OF THE TYPE/wait, bad actin AND can't rap, what are u the John CENA OF THE SITE??/ aww fuck it, I'm eager for a fight but to PRESSURE THE MATTER, I'll STRETCHER A RAPPER/ giant vs a dwarf & his necks hurting,... somebody get WEBSTER A LADDER/

Folks, he's reatrded & I'm too CRUEL FOR THE KID/ & ya thought he was spittin?. Nah.....that's just DROOL ON THE BIB/ I didn't mean to RHYME LONG but u so busy getting slaughtered, where's the TIME GONE?/ & the short bust just left, damn..now he's lost this battle AND his RIDE HOME !!!

Punchlines : Crimson.
Wordplay : Crimson
Flow : Both..
Multis : Crimson
Metaphors : Superior I Guess
Overall : Crimson..

Crimson Bodied This Shit...
The Bar Low Line Was Funny...
Superior Your Decent..
Just Step Your Caliber Up
Your a Little Light With Your Plays..

Cat sweep to crimson

Superior could of at least gotten flow

but crimson edged it out with his consistent multis..

Lol

Superior if you need help don't be scared to hit some of the more experienced members up

OMG !!!!!!

THE DUDE crimson ran thru this guy those punches were insane on sum real shit even superior knows he lost

vote: crimson cat sweep (maybe not multis but w/e)

3-0 KO

dang

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