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Something I wrote a very long time ago. Feedback Please. Peace.


My thoughts are created through the cosmic fusion of celestial imaginations,
Empowering me to break free from the chains of foetal positions,
As my mental dispositions evolve into elevated methods of thinking,
My words shine over planets so on earth we can see the light that they're reflecting...
Seen by the demons and observed by heavenly organisms,
Opening locked doors my soul escape from prisons,
Storing power and energy from where human hope is designated,
Residing in other dimensions where my soul and mind are conjugated...
Blooming through the photosynthesis absorbed by the light of honesty,
Painful truths light the pathway for my third eyes integrity,
And when I reach the end I perceive all the angles through geometrics,
Mimicking all my actions in parallel universes until I'm infinitely symmetric...

definitely feeling this...seeing yourself from this light is a hard depth to reach, it definitely shows creativity and can definitely paint a picture reading this. The only thing I would do is structurize it, but the message still gets across the way you presented it here.

Keep submitting more...

Peace