Hip Hop Forum

A
Assemble Assassins, Amplify Artilary, Angle And Alter Armys
Ascend Axes At Asses Attackin Ankles and Aratecate Artorys *ouch*
After Acid Attracted Aggressive Anger Aboard Awaits An Arbiter
Im Absent Actin, high As Aladin, use Arsonal And Acetate his Armor
Attach Antlers At All Areas Around And Ammunate Arms
A-holes Get Anal After I Ate-those And Aputate Arms....Amen
B
Broken, Beatin By Bashes, Brothers Burried Beneath Baskits
Below Belongs Battered Burned Bodys, But me the Baddest
Baffling, Battling, Battering But I Brightin like Baterys
Because Bruising Bitches is'nt the Biggest Business Basterd-please


damn im tired guys sorry couldnt finish......L8rz

damn im gettin no luv on dis..

Homie u got give feedback to another post and show a link before u can get feedback. Do this and I got cha on the feed.

no deal

Nice man showing some real skill here

Too short. If yer gonna call the piece ABC's, at least have the C in there. Topic has been done numerous times, I never like these pieces to begin with because its usually nothing more than babbling and incoherent phrases that tell no story or have any real meaning. Props for trying, but I think peeps would have a hard time trying to top Blackalicious' rendition.

TheRuckus wrote:Too short. If yer gonna call the piece ABC's, at least have the C in there. Topic has been done numerous times, I never like these pieces to begin with because its usually nothing more than babbling and incoherent phrases that tell no story or have any real meaning. Props for trying, but I think peeps would have a hard time trying to top Blackalicious' rendition.

yea bro I was so tired so i had to go to sleep, Ima get at this soon fasho, but iwasnt tryin out due nobody, just showing im capable of wordplay, and just holdin it down in text. Wasnt the best but I'll put sumthin good out soon, good lookin on feed

yeah, good start