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Post by Problemz »

This Joint Here, I Did 4 My Shrty for Feb14th. Me n here been on n off like cable in tha proj for 4 yrs haha, all in all i luv this bitch!!!!

Dropp ya 411 homies.
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Post by TreTru »

well for sure ya consistent..i like the more
mainstream joints..too so i was feelin the concept..

beat was pretty good..the sample was the highlight..but i
felt this one matched concept well..are you makin these beats?

verses all pretty nice lyrically nice..i mean a couple juggles
but not too bad..ya style is pretty complex so it's high difficulty..
but i'm sure you you cut adjust the wrinkles out..

all n all good drop dude..
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Post by Problemz »

no doubt. good looks on tha 411. Na not me on tha beats, i jus spit, haha... my shorty was wantin m ta write her sompothin for a min, so i did this joint for her for v-day.

but good looks for tha feed yo.
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Post by - Mutual - »

this was good shyt
the flow was good uptempo
the lyrics were pretty good
the beat i heard earler today on soundclick
as it happens nice spittin to it though
overall i liked this track can i use it fo the mixtape get to me man
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by RAJE »

this was good, the flow was quick and you pulled it off real good,

beat matched the concept perfectly, and i like how you integrate your words with the sampled hook, that worked.

lyrics make sense which is a good thing, easy to understand.

all in all i like this,

keep it coming man.
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Post by Cuttin P »

yo this shit is pretty good man! I like ya flow on this... quick and steady and you riding the bitch very well! good job homie... i normally hate the sped up samples in tracks but u chose a nice beat to spit too. Again Good Job. I'm sure ya girl loved it!

Speaking of which, i've been with my girl for 7 years straight (no off and on stuff) and she too wants a song... I never really had a way to approach it... especially one i think would capture all i wanted it to say and mean. To hear this showed me that it is actually possible to pull it off. thanks for that!
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Post by Problemz »

no doubt homie... yeah my shrty loved this joint, play tha shit ova n ova im sikk of hearin it!!! haha, but ne ways good lookin for ya feed doggy i appeciate it 4eal....
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Post by PIRATEPRODUCTIONS »

this is what real muzikz for man, tha whole atmo & vocal presence is on fyre itz clean as fuk i cant fault it
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Post by Kurse »

Definately have a steady and solid flow about you.
Concept works for me too becuz it's sumthin I'd touch too...always gotta show luv to ya wifey at sum point pimpin.
Beat was delicate and soft. Not bad...but not the best I've heard to set the mood. I think the thing that ruined it the most for me was the production tags throughout the instrumental. I personally would never use a beat with that shit in it because it pulls too much from the song when it's done...which in this case it did as well.
But that happens to any artist that uses a beat with tags.
Mixing seems decent.
Good track overall.
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Post by SolQet »

right rii, da concept n da beat match perfectly. i love wat chu did wit da hook, n ya flow was on point. eaasy listenin, good drop!
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