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http://www.www.illestlyrics.com/copyrig ... 198a578a9/

sumin i came up with pretty quickly

i like it better than most of my other songs thought i'd get it up here

lyrics:

yeeaaaaaah
Mutual

i'm here to tell you all a lil bit of truth
i'm sick of dudes callin eachtothers nikkas in the booth
i'm sick of dudes say they G without the proof


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this is for the thugs lookin for are rhymes to steal
this is for the fakes who take lines as meals
if you dont agree rebut against this my minds appeal
time for all of us to look up and be real

man when i woke up i realised last night
that i aint livin jus crusin through my life
chosin right from wrong we can't like
people who cant write freestyle jus bite
back on topic the deceptive rockets
ya too late to stop it so man jump off it
it's implode in ya mind corrode then you'll find
not a bone in ya spine yellow belied flow of the line
i know my design is unorthodox yet blowin ya shrines
dedicated to me hated on beats underated for heat
debated in streets of distress ill fated for peace
make war get all this hatin to cease but see
i dont hang out on the streets stealin call myself a G
nah i say to myself i'm free this false pretense aint got a hold of me
it's easy goin see makes sense in ya head like poetry
distilled concept quick spilled nonsense listen
my minds like a prism one shape all the way thru yet missin
the solid capabilities
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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good job mate, this is an improvement for you in every aspect of audio
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Post by - Mutual - »

thanks for the feed Sub

uppin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Problemz »

Liked tha beat, and i liked tha topic. Deff gotta work on ya flow n ya quality tho doggy. I havent heard any of ya past ishh tho, but som1 up top said this was an improvment from b4, so congrats. just try ta bring it up a leval every time u lay sompthin down my dude.
KEEPP SPITTIN!!!
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thanks for the feed P will be returned
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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