Hip Hop Forum

I recently moved back to where I'm at, and my boy been tryin to get me back into writing. Over the weekend we recorded two songs.

"All Around Me"
1st verse: J. Lace
2nd verse: myself
Bridge: J. Lace

"Dopeness"
1st verse: me
2nd verse: J. Lace

feedback appreciated, good or bad!! dont matter to me, it's been like 4 years since I've sat down and written anything, so all criticism is appreciated!

www.myspace.com/dtaem420

"all around me" - im a fan of that instrumental
j.lace was pretty sick with his flow n content, only complaint was the mixing, vocals were pretty quiet

ur flow tho was a little odd, not sure what to say about it, not terrible i can maybe hear some potential, rusty i suppose since ya said its been 4 years


"dopeness"

ur verse was a bit better than in the other track, j.lace pretty decent again



ur accent n somethin about the flow sorta remind me of "dead silence"


anyways keep at it, shake the rust off

uppin

nice shyt i liked the all around me shyt nice beat an the flow was pretty good from both but like that ^ need better mixn a bit like me

2nd beat was my fav this was dope the vocal maybe a lil to loud but stayed nice completly dope shyt an u do remind me of Dead Silence evr so slightly

keep'em comin