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Punches
Personals
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Metas/Similes
Flow
Creativity
Entertainment

Just Let Me Know if There's Any u Wnna Switch Around Man.

Due 2 Days After Both Checks, Just Consider This Mine.

Bump For Check.

forgot bout this..

yeah, check..

Aright is This Still On?

i Thought u Left The Site at 1st But Clearly Not. My Verse is Pretty Much Done Anyway ill Post it Either Tonight Or Tomorrow.

LoL @ kurse...

yeah umm i havent started, but ill whip some shit up...

Aright Let's Go.

James 'Plays-With-Fire', But Not THAT Way, Watch Me Leave This Lame-Retired ..||
'Dickhead' if i Throw Low Blows Below The Belt i Guess im Aiming-Higher ..|| (Hehe)
Test This Man, Kid, His Heart Thumps, Chest-Expanding When The Best's-Advancing ..||
'SJ's Above D?' Only if Sarah Parker Gets a Breast-Enhancement! ..||*
Beat Him Like a Dog, Same Reaction He'll 'Bite', Think Quotations-Harm-Me? ..||
Check it, He 'Recycles XL' Like Fatties Donating To The Salvation-Army! ..||**
Tries To 'Get in FL' More Than Cubans, Loser's Never Landing-The-Gash ..||***
Dude's Palms So Fuckin Hairy i Bet Any Fool That Shakes ur Hand-Gets-a-Rash! ..||
ur Spittin is 'Tight' Man Cuz u Force Them Harder Than Fat-Kids-Fittin-in-Spandex ..||
Wack-Bitch Ain't Hittin im Spittin Sick Classic-Writtens-i-Plan-Wrecks ..||
Quick-Witted, i Slam-Vets, Like illest's Crashed u Leave Em 'Bored-Stiff!' ..||
'Mop The Floor With u' But ur Drops Make it Easy To See u Can't Absorb-Shit! ..||
in One Ear Out The Other, Please Man, ill Hurt And Murk u With The Worst-Of-Spits ..||
ill Murder-This Worthless-Bitch, Stretching Bars Just Proves u Can't Word-ur-Shit! ..||
i Go Further, Like Nostradamus Predicting Tragedy With Rhymes-That-i-Send ..||
Can u imagine This Guy in a Live Battle? Explaining Half His Lines-at-The-End! ..||
Like The Tits in ur Avy u 'Fall When ur Exposed' ur Rhymes-Tiring-Dude ..||
Looks Like 2 Steps Next To ur Name, That's How Easy it is To Climb-Higher-Than-u! ..||
Dom-is-Set To Bomb-This-Pest And Exterminate But Believe ur Not-a-Threat ..||
You'll Never Pause-This-Vet, That Joker Avy's The Closest To Applause-u-Get! ..||****

*SJ = Sarah Jessica Parker Aka SJP.
**Used a CBS Punch Really Similar To Chino XL's in 'What u Got'.
***FL Referring To Double FL, Gash is Another Word For Pussy, Donno if Americans Use it.
****Used To Have an Avy Of The Joker Clapping His Hands.


Look Who's Fucking Back.

Dear Domino,



Yo..
One Look At Me And This CLOWN-WILL-PIDDLE!! Pussy, You'll Never Wear A CROWN,-YOURE-BRITTLE..
Cuz It Only Takes Basic Eye Sight To See That My Lines'll "Split Domino" Right "DOWN-THE-MIDDLE"!!
I POUND-WIT-MISSILES!! N My BLADES'LL-BURST Ur NAVEL-FIRST Then Slice N Dice Till Ya FACE-IS-MURKED..
You're A FABLE-TWIRP Plus This "Dudes A Fuckin Joke", Its No Wonder U Got Interviewed On "APRIL-1ST"!!
Ur UnSTABLE-VERSE Is Garabge I Been In A MILLION-FIGHTS-MAN Ill Numb Ya Have Ya FEELIN-MY-RIGHT-HAND..
Ur A Hasbeen Plus We All Know "Mino's/Minnow Washed Up For Shore" Like The Boat From "GILLIGANS-ISLAND"!!
Im A DILIGENT-WISEMEN!! Ur Just An Old Poser I BREAK-ALL-FAKERS Leave U Shook Like VASE-SALT-SHAKERS..
Grip Ya Ribs An Sever Ya Cage Cuz gainst' Me? You'll "Never Be Safe" Like "Obese BASEBALL-PLAYERS"!!
Im The Mayor So Check It.. My Spits So Hot I Put BLISTERS-ON-HERBS No Way This KIDS-A-MOBSTER..
My Spits Is Awesome So Ill Have U Askin For Ya Life Cuz Dawg U Jus "Actin Like U Nice" Like "MISTER-RODGERS"!!
Ya SISTER-SLOBBERS On My Knob Sir!! Yea Up On My DICK-IS-HER-JAWS But Yo Ya Verse Was RIDDLED-WITH-FLAWS..
This KID'LL-JUST-PAUSE Cause You Just A "Big Scared Pussy" Like The "Lion" From The "WIZARD-OF-OZ"!!
Grab Ya Face N RIP-IT-WITH-CLAWS!! Then Make U Dissappear Wit My Bare Hands Like I Was GIFTED-WIT-WIZARDRY..
This KID-BE-IN-MISERY Cuz I Know Ya Names "Domino" But Thats No Excuse For Ya SHITTY-DELIVERIES!!
Im NIFTY,-HES-BIGGER?-PLEASE! My DROPS-HOT-AS-SHIT So Please HOP-OFF-MUH-DICK Or Ill CHOP-OFF-YA-WRISTS..
Over 6000 Posts?!? Its Obvious This Nerd "Dedicates His Life To The Site/Sight" Like A Fuckin "OPTOMETRIST"!!
Leave DOM-DROPPED-IN-PISS!! Cuz Kid We Will Never Be Even.. U Couldnt PULL-CLOSE,-YER-WRITES-HOPELESS-DUDE..
And Since Youre Such A Fan Of "Heavy Metal".. I'll Be Nice And Drive This "BULLDOZER-RIGHT-OVER-YOU"!!
Now Its Time For MY-CLOSER-TO Rip Ya BONES-APART N EXPOSE-YA-HEART The Toast'll Blow Ya DOME-TUH-SHARDS..
I OWN-YA-BARS Ur Not KNOWN-FOR-SMARTS Cuz This Pussy "Stays Frontin' For Recognition" Like "ROSA-PARKS"!!!!


Muawahahahahahaahahahahaaaa!!!
G'Luck Doggy...

If U Dont Understand Any Bars, Dont Vote, Or Jus Ask...
(no votes from karnage)
**Explained Votes Only**

Bumpette For Vottes.

James 'Plays-With-Fire', But Not THAT Way, Watch Me Leave This Lame-Retired ..||
'Dickhead' if i Throw Low Blows Below The Belt i Guess im Aiming-Higher ..|| (Hehe)

this wasnt great in my opinion nice flow to it jus didnt hit with a great impact 6/10

Test This Man, Kid, His Heart Thumps, Chest-Expanding When The Best's-Advancing ..||
'SJ's Above D?' Only if Sarah Parker Gets a Breast-Enhancement! ..||*

this was great IMO nice original the flow was good 9/10

Beat Him Like a Dog, Same Reaction He'll 'Bite', Think Quotations-Harm-Me? ..||
Check it, He 'Recycles XL' Like Fatties Donating To The Salvation-Army! ..||**

this was aiight nice wordplay here the multi was a lil off but it was cool 8/10

Tries To 'Get in FL' More Than Cubans, Loser's Never Landing-The-Gash ..||***
Dude's Palms So Fuckin Hairy i Bet Any Fool That Shakes ur Hand-Gets-a-Rash! ..||

dunno bout this one i understood it but the multi wasn't flowed properly i havent noticed him around FL lol dunno maybe it's jus me 5.5/10

ur Spittin is 'Tight' Man Cuz u Force Them Harder Than Fat-Kids-Fittin-in-Spandex ..||
Wack-Bitch Ain't Hittin im Spittin Sick Classic-Writtens-i-Plan-Wrecks ..||

nice flow the multi was pretty dope and wordplay was a bit low but still a good bar 8.5/10

Quick-Witted, i Slam-Vets, Like illest's Crashed u Leave Em 'Bored-Stiff!' ..||
'Mop The Floor With u' But ur Drops Make it Easy To See u Can't Absorb-Shit! ..||

i liked this punch prolly my fav from your verse maybe not the best but had nice flow to it and nice humorous multi 9.5/10

in One Ear Out The Other, Please Man, ill Hurt And Murk u With The Worst-Of-Spits ..||
ill Murder-This Worthless-Bitch, Stretching Bars Just Proves u Can't Word-ur-Shit! ..||

true IMO nice multies here not forced flowed well nice bar 9/10

i Go Further, Like Nostradamus Predicting Tragedy With Rhymes-That-i-Send ..||
Can u imagine This Guy in a Live Battle? Explaining Half His Lines-at-The-End! ..||

flow was on but still the punch seemed to be lacking something coulda maybe worded it better lol 6.5/10

Like The Tits in ur Avy u 'Fall When ur Exposed' ur Rhymes-Tiring-Dude ..||
Looks Like 2 Steps Next To ur Name, That's How Easy it is To Climb-Higher-Than-u! ..||

this punch didnt have a major sting either better than the last bar but the flow was aiight the multies were better 8.5/10

Dom-is-Set To Bomb-This-Pest And Exterminate But Believe ur Not-a-Threat ..||
You'll Never Pause-This-Vet, That Joker Avy's The Closest To Applause-u-Get! ..||****

ohhhhh i liked this nice personal type shyt if u could call it that but yeah this was a good bar from you Dom the multi was a lil off with syllables but still worked overall nice shyt 9/10

total:80/100


Yo..
One Look At Me And This CLOWN-WILL-PIDDLE!! Pussy, You'll Never Wear A CROWN,-YOURE-BRITTLE..
Cuz It Only Takes Basic Eye Sight To See That My Lines'll "Split Domino" Right "DOWN-THE-MIDDLE"!!

nice punch the flow is good an nice multies 9/10

I POUND-WIT-MISSILES!! N My BLADES'LL-BURST Ur NAVEL-FIRST Then Slice N Dice Till Ya FACE-IS-MURKED..
You're A FABLE-TWIRP Plus This "Dudes A Fuckin Joke", Its No Wonder U Got Interviewed On "APRIL-1ST"!!

ohh this a nice personal flowed well with the multies 8/10

Ur UnSTABLE-VERSE Is Garabge I Been In A MILLION-FIGHTS-MAN Ill Numb Ya Have Ya FEELIN-MY-RIGHT-HAND..
Ur A Hasbeen Plus We All Know "Mino's/Minnow Washed Up For Shore" Like The Boat From "GILLIGANS-ISLAND"!!

the flow was a lil bit off an the multi didnt rhyme properly 6/10

Im A DILIGENT-WISEMEN!! Ur Just An Old Poser I BREAK-ALL-FAKERS Leave U Shook Like VASE-SALT-SHAKERS..
Grip Ya Ribs An Sever Ya Cage Cuz gainst' Me? You'll "Never Be Safe" Like "Obese BASEBALL-PLAYERS"!!

i liked this the simlile was good maybe not the best rhyming but nice 7.5/10

Im The Mayor So Check It.. My Spits So Hot I Put BLISTERS-ON-HERBS No Way This KIDS-A-MOBSTER..
My Spits Is Awesome So Ill Have U Askin For Ya Life Cuz Dawg U Jus "Actin Like U Nice" Like "MISTER-RODGERS"!!

wasn't feelin this as much the flow changed a lil bit but the multies was okay 6.5/10

Ya SISTER-SLOBBERS On My Knob Sir!! Yea Up On My DICK-IS-HER-JAWS But Yo Ya Verse Was RIDDLED-WITH-FLAWS..
This KID'LL-JUST-PAUSE Cause You Just A "Big Scared Pussy" Like The "Lion" From The "WIZARD-OF-OZ"!!

this punch is a lil played i thought as soon as i saw lion i knew u was going for that 6/10

Grab Ya Face N RIP-IT-WITH-CLAWS!! Then Make U Dissappear Wit My Bare Hands Like I Was GIFTED-WIT-WIZARDRY..
This KID-BE-IN-MISERY Cuz I Know Ya Names "Domino" But Thats No Excuse For Ya SHITTY-DELIVERIES!!

this was nice nameplay but that aint a cat in this battle dope multies great flow 8/10

Im NIFTY,-HES-BIGGER?-PLEASE! My DROPS-HOT-AS-SHIT So Please HOP-OFF-MUH-DICK Or Ill CHOP-OFF-YA-WRISTS..
Over 6000 Posts?!? Its Obvious This Nerd "Dedicates His Life To The Site/Sight" Like A Fuckin "OPTOMETRIST"!!

maybe a lil bit lame IMO sorry but it wasnt great didnt leave a sting lol the flow wasnt great either ya bars got longer but yeah 6.5/10

Leave DOM-DROPPED-IN-PISS!! Cuz Kid We Will Never Be Even.. U Couldnt PULL-CLOSE,-YER-WRITES-HOPELESS-DUDE..
And Since Youre Such A Fan Of "Heavy Metal".. I'll Be Nice And Drive This "BULLDOZER-RIGHT-OVER-YOU"!!

this was dope i liked this personal sorta shyt really feelin the flow witht the multies it was a good bar 9.5/10

Now Its Time For MY-CLOSER-TO Rip Ya BONES-APART N EXPOSE-YA-HEART The Toast'll Blow Ya DOME-TUH-SHARDS..
I OWN-YA-BARS Ur Not KNOWN-FOR-SMARTS Cuz This Pussy "Stays Frontin' For Recognition" Like "ROSA-PARKS"!!!!

i wasn't really likin this bar didnt seem to make much sense to me thats my opinion the flow was off a tad and the multies was too 7/10


Total:74/100

Punches - Domino
Personals - Domino
Multis - Scott
Metas/Similes - Scott
Flow - Domino
Creativity - Both
Entertainment - Domino

Overall Vote

bit one-sided in my opinion

opener/closer- D

flow- D

personals- D

punches- D

creative- TIE

multies- S Easy

metas- S

overall vote- Domino, better use in punches, while scott's punches wasn't really on point as domino's was imo


if ya dont wanna count this, i'll be glad to do a bar-n-bar break down

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That's The Voting Rules, im Not Sure if u Have To Have ALL The Above Listed, Or Just One. So i Donno.

Anyone Wnna Clear This Up?

Nah Count It , They Said In The New Rules That New Users Can Vote.

LoL @ him sayin its one sided cuz i voted against him in his battle with fraud... hate vote much?


nah, count the vote... shit ill take any votes...i'd rather lose then have no votes, LoL...


btw...good shit Dom

Nah.. Don't Count The Vote...

Instead i'll Vote..
And Maybe Cee4 And All Them Will..

im Not Bothered if The Vote's Allowed Or Not.

And Yeah Same With u SJ.