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venomous

Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 5:53 pm
by eMCee Havic
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the champion has returned folks! strong pen movements in firm strokes
rhymes dirty for germ-phobes an inferno in the journal i burn notes
the champs fast these worms slow they cant shake off my jabs and hooks
a title stealer "this mans a crook" smarts dont come if you pass on books
tight with this so emcees have to look to see where im cuttin the edge
a heavywieght thats dumpin the sledge an american most juse frontin 2 pledge
my enimies end up numb in the end so dont ever step or think of attackin me
pullin down emcees like gravity words like typoons battles end in catastrophy
so constantly po pos be askin me question cuz they know i have the capacity
to drasticly do things with out thinkin it through cuz the drinkin i do
a cama kazi turpedo thats sinking a crew most fake but im keepin it true
have your parents weepin 4 you with out leaving a trace 4 the pigs
an offense thats facin a blitz if your a target than pray 4 it quick
the word smith i slay wit a spit cause my lyrical sword moves with swiftness
the doc proved its sickness that allows me to sink a tooth in scriptures



it is what it is, hate it or love it, just leave some feed

Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 11:13 am
by Ambiguous Realm
wasn't bad, i like ur other pieces better, but the flow went pretty smooth, nothin outstandin but overall it was decent