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I didn't know what i was writing until it was written, but it's just a track reflecting on school from my perspective...


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haha... ur like a young Kanye.... good shit homie...

7/10

keep em comin dude

thanks, i'll return the feed on your next track

yeah feelin it..for real..rappin bout
some real shyt..nice shyt..it's a good
song...probly marketable..if you cleaned
it up and rerecorded it..keep droppin..

Just Need A Little More Action You Know What I Mean..A Little More Emotion In The Delivery.
But All In All, You Stayed On Point
And I Like The Vibe, I Feel You On
That Man...Tight

very very dope track
concept was real good
like stated above
could be a main streamer
but one thing u needa learn
is to
stop forcing some lines
u try to squeeze in that last word or so
in ya bars so it makes sense or w.e
if u can find diff. ways to do that
why not squeezing nething ne
than thatll be fine
9/10

thanks for the feed, and good advice Dead Silence