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[Phasewon]
My mental capacity spans for galaxies, eradicate galactics
Rapidly, my fate could battle weight and gravitate the planets
Evaporate the axis, defyin' the laws of physics
To cause eclipses, and have the gods inflict apocalypses
Have the stars evicted, and blow the light away
Then right away, I'll reverse the cycle and turn the night to day
So find a way to get your game to par, raise the bar
Yo you aint a star, fuck what these A&R's, say you are
So play your part, or I'ma have to dead you already
With a heavy machetti, ready to turn ya head to spaghetti
Take every single lyrical syllable literal
Spittin' metaphysical miracles, like in spiritual rituals
Visible vividness/ mixed in biblical scriptures,
Depicts subliminal pictures, projectin' visual images
Precision is key on my level, when bringin' deviants that'll
Load they glocks and blow off a piece of your temple
Me and the devil are embraced in deep discussions
Facial reconstruction, beef with us'n face the repercussions
Give mc's concussions, 'til their basic reproductions
Are basically eruptin', spontaneously combustin'
The Reaper's comin' with a lethal prescription
The needle incision, will leave you twitchin' in the fetal position
The evil has risen, my pen is possessed by a spirit
That spreads through my lyrics, and infects you the second you hear it
It's best that you fear it, once it affects your appearance
It'll appear when you pear in any mirror when you're near it
The cure is an injectional dose, as you convulse
While dispensin' projectional jolts, of electrical volts[/align]

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[Phasewon]
My mental capacity spans for galaxies, eradicate galactics
Rapidly, my fate could battle weight and gravitate the planets
Evaporate the axis, defyin' the laws of physics
To cause eclipses, and have the gods inflict apocalypses
Have the stars evicted, and blow the light away
Then right away, I'll reverse the cycle and turn the night to day
So find a way to get your game to par, raise the bar
Yo you aint a star, fuck what these A&R's, say you are
So play your part, or I'ma have to dead you already
With a heavy machetti, ready to turn ya head to spaghetti
Take every single lyrical syllable literal
Spittin' metaphysical miracles, like in spiritual rituals
Visible vividness/ mixed in biblical scriptures,
Depicts subliminal pictures, projectin' visual images
Precision is key on my level, when bringin' deviants that'll
Load they glocks and blow off a piece of your temple
Me and the devil are embraced in deep discussions
Facial reconstruction, beef with us'n face the repercussions
Give mc's concussions, 'til their basic reproductions
Are basically eruptin', spontaneously combustin'
The Reaper's comin' with a lethal prescription
The needle incision, will leave you twitchin' in the fetal position
The evil has risen, my pen is possessed by a spirit
That spreads through my lyrics, and infects you the second you hear it
It's best that you fear it, once it affects your appearance
It'll appear when you pear in any mirror when you're near it
The cure is an injectional dose, as you convulse
While dispensin' projectional jolts, of electrical volts[/align]

Great vocabulary, rhyming, and dope concepts. Another incredible piece in my mind.

Damn.
Seriously. Damn.
I think you're the dopest new guy to come by illest.
keep droppin fam . I wanna see you drop a topical soon though. Just so we can see if ya more versatile

Damn bro.. ive worked with the same syllable multis and havent come up with sumthin that in depth b4, good shit 4 sure. keep em going

.. R.A.I .. wrote:Damn.
Seriously. Damn.
I think you're the dopest new guy to come by illest.
keep droppin fam . I wanna see you drop a topical soon though. Just so we can see if ya more versatile

no doubt, I got topicals on lock, just posting some lyrical shits up first...

'preciate the feed yall.

Definitely the dopest drop all year.

propz.
great everything
can't hate on this here..

Excellent. Love the rhyme schemes. Whole verse is quotable. You're definetely multi-talented.

this is the first piece ive read from you, n it was pretty straight

excellent multies n the rhymescheme was put together nicely, some were fairly predictable to be honest but overall it was real nice, i liked the concepts, sort of horrorcore but not quite

good shit, ill have to check out some of yer other drops

this was dope man the flow was hot
the vocab was str8 fire wit the multies
man had a smooth transition to the whole thing
cant wait to see topicals there aint anything to say u can topical yet(no hate)
but thats how it is ya still get props an respect on jus this piece
but tropicals we'll have to see lol
keep'em comin this shyt is nice