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[align=center]Speak my mind with plenty animosity towards enimies
Chosin' to be frozen when bullets rip in your vicinity
Duckin' and dodgin' cowarin' for cover in captivity
Cryin' like a bitch thinking' its mistaken identity
Unload tha clips and watch this bitch spit up like a new born
Swallow tha sword twist tha blade and watch him get torn
Understand that I'm tha man, and your destinies sworn
Mothafucka better run for cover listen up you've been warned
12 guage pumps tha shots out, shells fall to tha ground watch out
Sirens blazin' on tha cops route, waitin' for them bitches I got clout
I got something' for tha fags in blue an Ak-47 trigger locked out
Cop killer slugs hit'em in tha chest watch his intestines drop out
A manic maniac weildin' a machete with one smooth insision
Cut your head off with a surgical blade inch by inch with precision
Stick your head on tha counter then make a cup of coffee in tha kitchen
Ask you hows your day goin'….. oops I forgot that…. you ain't livin'
Poster boy for Riddillin…. Psyicotic makin' a pussy outta Jack tha Ripper
Brake my foot off in your ass, turn you into my own personal livin' slipper
Tha type of man who orders a coffee just to throw it in your face
In tha middle of Church yell FUCK JESUS CHRIST while there sayin' grace
My mind state is unstable, walkin' around laughin' like I'm in my right mind
Steal tha chair from tha disabled, snatch tha cane from tha blind
Save a little kitten, show it to a little girl, then snap its neck
Fuck a bitch doggy style then ram it in her ass before its wet
Pay some bums to fight each other then runaway and keep tha money
Bust into a soup kitchen with a gun, steal all tha food from tha hungry
Watch a man on fire begging for mercy, dump gas on him to help him burn
Go into a cancer ward light a cigarette, then flick my ash into an urn
See a man crawlin' in tha desert with one leg and no arms dyin' of thrist
Take my last fuckin' bottle of water, open it up and dump on tha dirt
You might call me sick, sayin' “You should be in a room with padded wallsâ€

lol, good finish

couple lines didnt sound really on..

ex: Swallow tha sword twist tha blade and watch him get torn

ex: Cut your head off with a surgical blade inch by inch with precision

maybe thats because im used to writing for audio so it sounds good/flows

regardless u had good subjects/ideas

good shit overall... shady typa sound

btw best line idea was the living slipper thing

haha, I liked this joint, although the lines seemed stretched and wouldn't work on a beat, unless you have a supa fast style that I'm not picking up, they were still entertaining and effective for the most part...

"Tha type of man who orders a coffee just to throw it in your face
In tha middle of Church yell FUCK JESUS CHRIST while there sayin' grace"

^^lol nice shit.