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(Tobacco..It Takes Lives..)
Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 1:33 pm
by Haz
tobacco takes lives
everyday it just takes live
it snatches with aggression
no mercy is given
its kills like a bad pain
what can i say?
its reign will never fade
its flow will remain like the everglades
murder is against the law..
but theres no rule against suicide
so they inhail..
inhail a cloud of death..
where the unknown lyes
with no profile...
they inhail...
a future of nightmares and hard days..
Tobacco kills...
its kills....
will no one get angry and take action?
its been killing me slowly...
i finally kill't it...
Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 5:48 pm
by eMCee Havic
lol im smoking a cigarette right now
but it does kill, but theres 3 trillion people on earth!!!!
people need to die
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 3:37 am
by K.O.
KO "smoking newports religiously since 2000."
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 9:47 am
by Lawgix
newports... those are the shit!!!!
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 10:49 am
by K.O.
Lawgix wrote:newports... those are the shit!!!!
OH OF COURSE. THEY'RE THE FUCKING BEST CIGARETTES IN THE WORLD!
IM GOING TO HAVE ONE RIGHT NOW. LOL
"I GOT A HUNDRED BLUNTS AND A BUNCH PIFF CUZ I SMOKE NEWPORTS, NEWPORTS" HAH
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:05 pm
by Glamtrash
I'm also smoking right now, and I wouldn't say it's because I'm suicidal lol. (eight buxx a carton bitchezzzzzz)
I get your point though. As a venting piece, this was good, as a well thought out structured poem (which I'm assuming it's not meant to be anyway), not so much. My guess is you threw it here because it wasn't a scripture. It's cool.
4.5/10.
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:18 pm
by Lawgix
Double.FL wrote: eight buxx a carton bitchezzzzzz)
8 dollars for a carton of smokes huh???
lemme pull out The Gay-O-Meter
Gomez Gimme The Final Answer Please!!!
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:23 pm
by Glamtrash
I'M FUCKING BI YOU FUCKIN FUCK.
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:26 pm
by Lawgix
Double.FL wrote:I'M FUCKING BI YOU FUCKIN FUCK.
not according to the Gay-O-Meter... don't make me give u its reading again...
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:26 pm
by Glamtrash
ur face is gay
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:28 pm
by Lawgix
ur face is... BI!!!
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:29 pm
by Glamtrash
Not even in your wettest of wet dreams.
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:31 pm
by Lawgix
hey don't u go and spoil my fuckin dreams!!!
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:33 pm
by Glamtrash
Fuckin dreams result in wet sheets due to lack of getting laid.
Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:37 pm
by Lawgix
