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i'm glad this shit will be on my mixtape prolly my favourite song ite
please leave feed i will feed links n shiit

Lyrics:
Mutual Hostility

Hook

Verse 1
i got that mary jane comin with my merry flames
all u rappers sound very lame
smoke sum bud an now u all sound the same
i'm on a pound again i astound my brain
gotta get round the pain i found my name
Mutual it pours when it rains smoke sum of the caine
with the MJ is very very strange in love the stains
gotta keep my feet on solid ground so i can be found
now

hook

Verse 2
i'm so high i cud be be like a fly
small but u cant mess with this guy
i fry the dope hide the coke
cops come knockin i'm ridin slow
now u now gotta go out da door
i'm in love an there's nothin i do about it
that Mary Jane head in the clouds i cant doubt it
i can take another route it draws me in
applause bein my cause is in i wanna be high
with Mary in the sky i won't let it slide
i won't ride by take a puff dont stay so rough
i make u love it make u all wanna hug it
all of ya ya will be above it ha ha poke it

this was... different..the first verse started straight n started fallin off, sounded like u were tryna do some t pain shyt except no autotune, second verse was iffy..it sounded like some older tracks from the past that i use to listen to except it was kinda choppy, i wasn't really feelin this all that much

thanks fo the feed koms

stop what u are doing and step away from the mic sir..
lol
dont rap with the mic so close to ur mouth
its all distorted and i cant understand half the things u say

nice try with the singing
but thats just not u lol

good start tho keep grindin

thanks for the feed Dead will be returned

Dead Silence wrote:its all distorted and i cant understand half the things u say

wouldn't be talkin much dude... cause half the time i can't understand half the shit u say on mic... plus ur off beat... so thats all i gotta say about that

Mutual...

gotta agree with Koms on this one man... it was okay... but the singin thing started off cool but then gradually fell off... the lyrics on the second verse were cool... good lyrics... but i just wasn't really feelin this man... good attempt tho i ain't knockin that... but just keep at it... and like Silence said up there... don't put ya mouth so close to the mic... distortion is a bitch when ur tryin to listen to what ur sayin... i'm glad ya put the lyrics up so i could follow along... but just keep the mic away from ya mouth don't press up on it... step back from the mic and speak up... get louder with the vocals... then people will hear ya...

give this a 4/10 lets see what u can do next round homie

peace

aiight well i dropped anotha track which i think is a lot better for sound

dis was weird dawg no offense da beat was dope but ur whole rhyme was like whoa wtf 2 me I couldn't bump it like i would wit other tracks. U need 2 practice more on da mic i kno ur barely startin but ur emotion wasn't there keep droppin kid

yeah this wasnt great i thought i majourly let the beat down but my new track called "track wrecka" is better