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Theres No Way You Could Say This Kid`s An Apprentice
To Get Ma Wisdom Checked I Aint Gotta Visit The Dentist
I Hit So Relentless
Spit Just To Vent This, The Grand Canyon Couldnt Channel My Rage
I Gotta Show Patience, On Probation, Fuck The Panel N Cage
That Shit Gets Handled With Age, A New Head On Broader Shoulders
Less Reckless But More Calculating, This Marauders Colder
This Marauders Older, Out This World Call Me Cee/Sea Of Tranquillity
But I Used To Bleed So Damn Willingly
I Remember Mama Had Visions Where She'd See A Man Killin Me
Nearly Got Married To The Streets But I Left That Fool At The Aisle
Started Writin, Illest Got The Longest Flow Im The Jewel Of The Nile
Combine The Cruel With The Vile, Im Straight While Dudes Meander
Some Fags Real Good For Slander But In A Real Feud They Pander
Cee4 The Great, Like Alexander, Compare Ma Writtens With Them?
Nah! Ma Spittin Condemns, Even Ma Recycle Bin Is Littered With Gems
Bars Rippin Like Em`s, Attacks Is Real/Israel As Palestinian Rockets
And Ma Eyes Absorbed So Much Shit They Hardly Fit In Their Sockets
I Got That Wealth You Cant Fit In Ya Pockets
Cee4 Got That Knowledge N Bitch U Cant Stop It

liked that Wisdom check line!


shit was a nice read...nothing spectacular!!


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nice multis good flow playa

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i think the lack of feed on this is appauling
this was good the nicely done multies here
had a dope flow to it and i loved readin this
the punches were good like Quix had mentioned
the wisdom shiit was dope i think the rhymes
they had the vocab and had a touch of excellence
keep'em comin

Theres No Way You Could Say This Kid`s An Apprentice
To Get Ma Wisdom Checked I Aint Gotta Visit The Dentist


The Concept's Been Used But I Liked How You Used It.. Sort Of Freshened It Up.
Good Opener IMO.

I Hit So Relentless
Spit Just To Vent This, The Grand Canyon Couldnt Channel My Rage
I Gotta Show Patience, On Probation, Fuck The Panel N Cage

Smooth Smooth Multis, In a Way I Thought You Could String Somethin With The "Vent This" Part, So Prior 2 You Sayin That I Could Understand What You Were Talkin About.. But No Doubt, Liked The Canyon Shit.


That Shit Gets Handled With Age, A New Head On Broader Shoulders
Less Reckless But More Calculating, This Marauders Colder
This Marauders Older, Out This World Call Me Cee/Sea Of Tranquillity
But I Used To Bleed So Damn Willingly

This Was Cool, Liked The Bars Up There More.. And The Sea Part Was Decent
Liked What you Tied The Nameplay In WIth..


I Remember Mama Had Visions Where She'd See A Man Killin Me
Nearly Got Married To The Streets But I Left That Fool At The Aisle
Started Writin, Illest Got The Longest Flow Im The Jewel Of The Nile

Straight End Rhymes , Mama Killin Me Reminded Me Of somethin Pac Said.
Like How U Tied This Bar Togetha.


Combine The Cruel With The Vile, Im Straight While Dudes Meander
Some Fags Real Good For Slander But In A Real Feud They Pander
Cee4 The Great, Like Alexander, Compare Ma Writtens With Them?
Nah! Ma Spittin Condemns, Even Ma Recycle Bin Is Littered With Gems


Recycle Bin Is Littered With Gems Haha..
liked That...

Like First 2 Lines Were Cool, It Was More Voicin Your Opinion
The Last 2 Lines Had Good Impact, Liked The Recycle Bin Part .


Bars Rippin Like Em`s, Attacks Is Real/Israel As Palestinian Rockets
And Ma Eyes Absorbed So Much Shit They Hardly Fit In Their Sockets
I Got That Wealth You Cant Fit In Ya Pockets
Cee4 Got That Knowledge N Bitch U Cant Stop It

Israel Sorta Came Off Forced In My Opinion , But Where U Were Goin With it Was Hot.. Aint Like The Second Line.. Third Line ( Pockets) I Was diggin
Last Line Was a Weak Closer.



This Piece Came From a Writer, Not a Text Battler In My Opinion
In Ways You Sorta Side Tracked To Ur Text Battlin Ways ..
But I Felt Like You Were Just in Ya Writer Mode And Try To Bring Somethin More to The Table
Honestly I Was Feelin It, Nice To See Different Shit Bein Dropped..


Anyways.. Good piece.