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i just sat down & started typing started typing
yea.. so like 3 or 4 bars are things i came up with the
other day... and just remebered...
The rest is off the top like A skimpy ounce..


who needs phds? i bleed thc.. i freed 3 strait Frees,
i need to see strait please..
u all just Came to Dream... I Place flame to green...
and obsess on ways to obtain fame it seems..
Constantly hazy and foggy... lazy n groggy...
Blazed Crazy N Frogy... So bored...
People dont amaze me & aww me...
i mean weres the J-z n nas heat..
Jumpin on the closest Victim... So gross its sicknin...
Like explosives ripped him..
That was just josephs Mission...
theres no suspicion... my flows conditioned..
Skill just grows... no Tradition.. Same Evil..
the 2.0 addition..
U couldn't diagnose my sickness if your name ment
domicile...
Im insane and homicidal... Setting fire to ur House cuz u
bore me..
Insulting u more than having it out with Hugh lorry..
u don't wanna have it out.. a full bout is too gory...
Merkin Kats is what im about true story...
i got drug tested and Broke the machine...
Provoking a scene.. Asked the chick at the counter .if she
wanted to get poked in the spleen...
she gave me a look mixed with anger and hunger... took
me to her place where i banged her and hung her...
id have fallen in love.. maybe invested in a wife... Cuz
she would have lied and Yes For the ( rest of her life )
Fuck the Stress n the strife... Quickest way to a bitch's
heart is through her chest with a Knife...
Fuck Chest incisions.. i was blessed and given the gift of
mixin text n wisdom..
Thoughts so sick u want them back in my head like
extradition...
Style nastier than Having sex in prison....
So what my next decision
Im decisive n Precise when i slice u with this knife.. till ur
lifeless
Take my advice n be nice ur life won't suffice ill take ur
wife's .. her life isn't priceless
SHe could be diced once or twice cooked with some spice
and server with White rice and sprite that is iceless
My styles like a vice cuz its tight... so i entice and excite...
with delight... When I write this...

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Wow... its Sad to see
But... i have to call it how i see it and i Declare the site dead!

I mean... sure my lil post here isnt worth a million dollars but its been a few days now... id have expected some kinda feed back.. shit even negitive feed or Sumtin...


Anyways.. R.I.P illest.. u will be missed

lol, just cuz nobody posts on you shyt doesnt mean the site is dead..

just means that your text is hard to read..
sounds like some corner cypher shyt, but was a decent enough read
i give it 6.5/10

maybe you need to polish your style more

who needs phds? i bleed thc.. i freed 3 strait Frees,
i need to see strait please..
u all just Came to Dream... I Place flame to green...
and obsess on ways to obtain fame it seems..
Constantly hazy and foggy... lazy n groggy...

Liked This Part Alot^..
just The Way It Flowed And Multis.






she gave me a look mixed with anger and hunger... took
me to her place where i banged her and hung her...
id have fallen in love.. maybe invested in a wife... Cuz
she would have lied and Yes For the ( rest of her life )
Fuck the Stress n the strife... Quickest way to a bitch's
heart is through her chest with a Knife...
Fuck Chest incisions.. i was blessed and given the gift of
mixin text n wisdom..
Thoughts so sick u want them back in my head like
extradition...
Style nastier than Having sex in prison....
So what my next decision



This Was The Next Best Clip Of Ya Verse^.

The Multis Were Nice, And How U STringed Everythin Togetha Was Raw
You Sorta Fell Off In Some Parts Of This long Ass Verse
So Jus Work On Bein More Consistent, Anyways Nice Drop. 7/10.

she gave me a look mixed with anger and hunger... took
me to her place where i banged her and hung her...
id have fallen in love.. maybe invested in a wife... Cuz
she would have lied and Yes For the ( rest of her life )
Fuck the Stress n the strife... Quickest way to a bitch's
heart is through her chest with a Knife...

fire^^

dope drop homie... for a quick keyed up drop, this is a nice read