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wordplay
nameplay
punches
flow

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so you wanna be the best mc is that right
ur rhymes are limp as your dick around a butch dyke
now ADOtJ or is it JdotA maybe its g-spot i don't what to say
you an illiterate ignorant nigga and im the KKk
i'll lynch you spit on you and drag you behind my truck
you say this aint me well now i just dont give a fuck
So listen up niggaa i gotta something to decree
I'll smash on any nigga who wants to fuck with TC
But to this battle i wanna leave you with a visual
I'm the nigga who just shat in your fuckin cheerios

If you beat me man you know its a fluke/
and im general so to me soldier you will salute
like an excersize bike this dude shouldnt have spoke
cuasemy flows are more fluent then michael phelps swimming strokes
your good times are past man there already through
cause your good days is like your boyfriend "and there behind you"
Before i started rappin the fans aplaud me
you had a good relationship until your chick saw me
jsut stop now man cause you cant stop me
cause im a saint in this game just like jeremy shockey

HOLLA
no hard feelings

VOTE

wordplay: ADotJ
nameplay: TC (attempted some)
flow: ADotJ
Punches: ADotJ
vote: adotj

Wordplay: None
Nameplay: TC
Flow: ADotJ
Punches: ADotJ

Overall vote: Adotj

dunno if u want an explanation but this wasnt great
no offense

3-0 is a knockout aint it? cause if it is i only need one more?

lol wow that was a painful read, good thing it was short

just to sum this up.. i felt tc had a smoother flow, but adotj had the better punches and wits, both below my standards but i gotta give it to adotj overall, it was slightly more entertaining to read

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