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This is me and my man Jheat Jheat is on the first verse and the hook Im on the second Verse soo listen to it and leave some feedback about my shit
ya digg??


ADotJ

Yo dis shit was dope ur nigga J got off think he sort of outshined u on dis track homie, ur verse was good but i think u could've came off a lil harder like ur boy, hook was dope lol like dat tummy line haha had me rollin, beat is off da chain didn't think they made a speed up version 2 it i got da slo mo version 2 da beat and I've been done recordin on da beat jus gotta mix it up good drop tho dawg imma rate dis a 9/10 i give it a 9 cuz i thought u could've came off a lil harder on ur verse keep droppin homie

Not super fond of these "in your face" anthem-like beats. They're alright at times, but personally I try to steer away from these type of productions.

As far J-Heat, he has some decent presence and good energy for this type of track. Mixing was decently clear, but theres a few lines where his double-up vocals are off. Like off to the point where it's too noticable. Hook was straight...well written and weel executed.

ADot you came off and did yo thang pretty nicely too. I think a few of your punchlines were set a bit nicer than J-Heats, but you both seemed to have gotten off equally well on the track. Like to hear you do sumthin more "down to earth" and a little less bragg'ish...but I'm sure we'll hear more for you in the future.

This doesn't make a bad filler for a street album...I'ma say 8/10

this joint was pretty raw..ya homie's presence is dope and his rhyme scheme but 4 some reason alot of it was actually off beat..your part was pretty
good too more on beat actually..decent prod..on this one but da beat sounded
a lil soft..anyway coo drop ..do ya thang dawg

kurse was right about the punch-in/double bein off a bit

but nice track man, u n the other dude did pretty good, nice rhymeschemes n some decent punches, n the chorus was cool

only thing i didnt like about your verse was the really heavy reverb, other than that, thought the shit was pretty sick, keep droppin man

Well, I think the track was hot, love songs that go HARD!!
Not always in the mood for just a good topic. I like the energy
Gets me hype & wanna battle with all the punches
First boy was gettin` off with the puns
you did pretty nice too, seems like 1st guy a bit more experienced
but I loved the song, this will get played again

Was just wondering if you were going to put it on a mixtape, that'd be hot too.

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