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So I rise

Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:32 am
by Lucky D
No thoughts when I write, I just write my thoughts/
Never split tha sea for me ya know I just walk across/
So many have been lost when they cross tha coldest boss/
This northern light's bright shine down on a golden cross/
Like spoken frost, Ya minds frozen in chosen spots/
Leavin' ya bones to rot, dusted up now ya moments lost/
And I'm just beginning…..tear down opponents with wordplays/
Vocabulary earth-lay and cursive scripts create cursed days/
This is tha first phase, ya dazed when my creativity shines/
Like proximity mines, blown away with proclivity finds/
Stop livin' these lies, caged animal in captivity cries/
Then ya read my lines and say “Its like a entity ryhmesâ€

Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:36 am
by ÐÛÇ£»
Pretty Decent Drop
Flow was there.. multis was there
Kinda didn't really get to get into the story..
Should of made it a lil longer IMO

This was a lil bit above average keep dropping tho..nice piece