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Gorgeous Collection -6- NERD's MAGIC DISS

Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 9:27 am
by MagicMark
*tapping keys*

*Phone rings*

-"Hello?"..

-"Hey, whats up"

-"Hey johnny, not much.. watching tv, surfing the net..."

-"You logged on to illest lyrics lately"

-"yeah im just about to, i see that Magic Marks still on there... i wish that faggot would move on already.. he's a joke"

-"yeah.. wonder what his next drop will be like"

..

his new drop?... i dont give a fuck..
everyone i know, hates him and says that bitch a punk
he spends all day online, its plain tha he don't live enough
if magic mark gave me his cd, i'd just stop n' rip it up
ha!.. he's so boring, magic just isnt cool
he couldn't fuck with hooks and lines if he went to fishin' school
people saying he's dope.. now that shit just ISNT TRUE
they said he was gonna elevate, but thats something he just didn't do
I been following him around, checking his sound from site to site
but he just aint good at battlin', he's just never fightin' right
he says he carries alot of weight, but i think he's the lighter type
he's shit and so dumb, he doesnt even try and bite
why oh why does he continue, theres never a day that bitch'll win
he didnt even fire back, when ekoms wrote that diss to him
he knew he wasnt good enough, he couldnt put in a vicious spin
said he would win the tourney, but thats something i wasnt witnessin'
he got knocked out real early, i hope his heart is dyin'
rell clearly fucked him up, but still he started crying (Wahhahah..)
"I didnt lose that, i was great, i really did deserve my place
i did beat him, ya'll dont know nothing, what did i do to deserve my fate??"
whining like a little bitch, but what can we expect from him?
he should just leave the site, i've heard from others they aint respectin' him!
he just a fake fag', he only drops stinkin' shit
plus he uses the N Word!, who the fuck does he think he is?
He a little white boy, who just doesnt know his place
he talking all hood, but thats somewhere he couldn't show his face
talking with all that slang? where did he learn to spit a rap
he just another wannabe, a fake punk, who jus' wished he's black
he acts all cool, but you can really see the fake smile
truth is he only started rapping after he seen 8 mile
he wanna be like eminem, but he just aint that damn talented
rell, jay, arv, precise and cee, all lined up and smashes the kid
why does he think he's top? i hate this faggots fucking guts
and he tryna change his style, like doesnt he fuckin' suck enough?
he thinks he's so clever, but really he's just boring me
and when he leave people comments, they just stand up and ignore his feed
who would value his opinion? this dick thinks he's got game?
if he's the baddest dude, why'd he get fucking owned by scott james?!?
tried to say its his laptops fault, tryna get his rep regained
but oh yes..right on time.. he's blaming something else again!
i dont care what people think of this, magics pain is all that matters
he dont know shit about real rap.. cause waynes his favourite rapper
and he's from northern ireland, to hiphop he can not relate
i wont stop till he's exposed, we can all stop this fake
he try and act street, wants to be weezy if you can imagine that
he probably gets a biro, to give himself wayne's matchin tats
what a sad fellow, he really is no type of being
he write and writes to try and improve, but really i dont see it
he used to rap about guns and ho's but people wernt believin' it
so he decided to change his style, but still people wont feed his shit
he just aint a cool guy, i dont know why people even like his writs
it certainly aint for the vocab, his flow or his "lightnin' wit"
even his best work.. everything is averag-ness
and even though he keeps asking, no one wants to collab with him
hahahaha.. you aint great...you just gettin' owned
and that time i battled you, it was a mistake that i got ko'd
then you made a joke about it, and thats not something i forget
i retired from writing that day... i'll make sure you have nothing but regrets..

.... log off...

Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 2:34 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
That Shit Was Dope Fam ..
I Loved it ..
It Had Some Nice Lines ..
Good Personals ..
It Mos Deffo Was a Good Read ..
I Read it Straight Thru ..
Only Thing ..Tha Beginnin Shoulda Been a Better Grabber ..
But Props

Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 2:31 am
by - Mutual -
ahh nice takin the Cham concept
puttin it too yaself
nice changes flow well
keep'em comin

Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:10 am
by F.A.M.E.
Dope diss. LOL @ "changin his style and flow and people still aint feedin it".

Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 6:58 am
by Arvincible
THat was sweet man i loved it, it came out real nice dude. had me rollin a few times lol

props

Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:44 am
by Quix
That Shit was Nice Duke! Liked this piece a lot!

Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 8:36 am
by ScottJames
^didnt read it.....



but this was one of your better drops IMHO..

this was my fav part..

"who would value his opinion? this dick thinks he's got game?
if he's the baddest dude, why'd he get fucking owned by scott james?!?
tried to say its his laptops fault, tryna get his rep regained
but oh yes..right on time.. he's blaming something else again!
i dont care what people think of this, magics pain is all that matters
he dont know shit about real rap.. cause waynes his favourite rapper"

shit was coo...good flow...good use of relevant subject matter..
yeah, like what everyone else was sayin...u held it down..like an unwatned boner...LoL