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Something I Wrote

Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 6:19 pm
by Brah-Vo
[align=center]No Matter How Much of a Goofball I am ..
I'll behave if you look At Me .
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No matter how bitter my Tears Are ..
My day will be Perfect if you sit With Me .
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A smile, no matter how beautiful and Sweet ..
Means Nothing If It's Not Yours .
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The path may be Narrow and Hard ..
But You'll Be Safe If You Hold my Hand .
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But, No Matter How Close We Are ..
You still feel So Far Away .[/align]

Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 4:12 am
by Glamtrash
Short, sweet, simple, and to the point. It's good dude, but the topic, particularly with that layout, has been overdone to shit. It's not that it's not good, it is. it's just that it's far too short to grasp anyone.

Keep droppin though.