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you better look to the sky, its your time to die
no place to hide positions been comprimised
its murder.. deadly homicide
thats what happens when my aims aligned


combat luetenit reachin deep in the sentence
a geninus demented so froms schools i was a senior suspended
through penance sugested, a new skillful art
if you aim for the heart you'll wind up missin your mark
like a shot in the dark shit just isnt smart
honed and mastered the art, crafted the best way to kill
dont doubt my skills,
my bulletz fill the guys eyes on the dollar bill
im crazy and basicly my goal is only to get-better
ill shoot the sixth-letter jump G's than hit-hector
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the sick-jester sept my jokes come wrapped-in-lead
i'll cap-ya-head from a distance just to laugh-at-death
pro bono mercenary so i dont have 2 cash-a-check
a devils-decifle more crazy than rebels-wit-rifles
my metal-ll'-smite-u like gods hand wrapped arround-u
silenced so no sounds-used 1 bullet that found-truth
2 reasons it found-u,
protracted through contract, wrong place n wrong-past
your death was prom-*ased* and ll' be brodcasted on comcast
i promise it'll be compact, short and over-quick
this solgier-is a lunatic i forgot where my border-is
killin for no reason thinkin i was ordered-this






updated.... uppin for feed

THis was dope as hell MD !
Flow was off the chain and so was the vocab. The whole thing was dope man (except the last bar. wasnt feelin that, kinda fell off).
It was just really readable and a dope concept.
Damn dude.
KEEP UP !

interesting little read, first thing ive seen from u

lol @ "pro-bono mercenary" <--- i liked that

flow was pretty decent, the rhymes fell off at some points, but i could detect the occasional sublinals which kept the flow, good shit

keep droppin

Nice multies, dude's got skill.

this right here was Nice...

i cant do one sylable rhymes... when i do it i feel like people will just make fun of me LOL... so when i read posts full of that it breaks my heart.


This was nice and complex... and a good showing of skills

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thanks for the feed still uppin 4 more