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[align=center]Yall Niggas Got Me real Confused out There..


I'ma Spray This Pest Up Like I'm Using Raid, He'll Be Refusing Aid..
C Ain Gangsta , i'll "Cut His Arms Out The Picture" Like hes ABUSING BLADES!
Let The Snoozing Fade.. i'll 'Wake Ya Up" Stuffed In a Caskit Doods Taped Ya Nuts!!
You Pussy & I'm Dirty Something Like The Taste Of Sluts..
I'm Above This Dood Hes Da Ocean..Thats Obsession It Couldnt Be Devotion...
'Ya Styles Week' Like 7 Day "P PROMOTION!!"..
Have you Slayed-Man..Shorten Ya Days Span..Even In July I Bring May Ham...
It's Deadly & Raw..My Mind Holds Macheddi's & Saws That'll Unsteady Ya Jaw..


When I Write I Abuse Da Dope, Friend ya Hyped? Den Lose Ya Hope, End Ya Life i'll USE DA SCOPE..
Your Wack & Can't 'See Complexity Eye To Eye Its Like The Reason U REFUSE TA VOTE!..
This Could BE FATAL, I'ma Put Um 'Unda Flow' Like HE NAVAL, How Could He BE STABLE?
Hes 'Behind In The Box' Like T.V. CABLES
Punch Fa Punch, Aint The Right Phraze...I Turned you To Dust Like Breakin up White Haze...
I At Sight Blaze..It's a Slight Phase..Like Layer Changes On a Nice Day...
You Aint a Champ Or King...i'll Have you Toned Down Like Samples Stringd.. Onto Tracks...
You a Ducka People On To That..Be a Honest Rat..You Wouldnt 'Grip A Tech' Like Omish Cats[/align]

I'ma Spray This Pest Up Like I'm Using Raid, He'll Be Refusing Aid..
C Ain Gangsta , i'll "Cut His Arms Out The Picture" Like hes ABUSING BLADES!

I like this shyt haha had me laughin..


all in all a pretty good drop.some stuff was a lil forced...of course i seen you do better but looks like this is sumthin you had to get outta your system.... coo mayne keep'em comin.

haha im glad im the first thing on your mind for the new year.
i`ll give it a quick breakdown since its about me


I'ma Spray This Pest Up Like I'm Using Raid, He'll Be Refusing Aid..
C Ain Gangsta , i'll "Cut His Arms Out The Picture" Like hes ABUSING BLADES!
^^^^
first line the multis forced. second lines good. arms wordplay is gettin kinda played but it still works


Let The Snoozing Fade.. i'll 'Wake Ya Up" Stuffed In a Caskit Doods Taped Ya Nuts!!
You Pussy & I'm Dirty Something Like The Taste Of Sluts..
^^^^
terrible. "doods taped ya nuts?" dont make sense to me and the dirty like sluts shit is basic as hell

I'm Above This Dood Hes Da Ocean..Thats Obsession It Couldnt Be Devotion...
'Ya Styles Week' Like 7 Day "P PROMOTION!!"..
^^^^
i liked this bar

Have you Slayed-Man..Shorten Ya Days Span..Even In July I Bring May Ham...
^^^^
dont even talk to me about forced shit again lol. may ham? nah its mayhem


It's Deadly & Raw..My Mind Holds Macheddi's & Saws That'll Unsteady Ya Jaw..
^^^^
filler. this bar does nothing to enhance the verse

When I Write I Abuse Da Dope, Friend ya Hyped? Den Lose Ya Hope, End Ya Life i'll USE DA SCOPE..
Your Wack & Can't 'See Complexity Eye To Eye Its Like The Reason U REFUSE TA VOTE!..
^^^^
first lines is just multis with no substance.
second line is so so. i cant see complexity eye to eye? hardly damaging


This Could BE FATAL, I'ma Put Um 'Unda Flow' Like HE NAVAL, How Could He BE STABLE?
Hes 'Behind In The Box' Like T.V. CABLES
^^^^
nice idea but i never knew we were in a box.

Punch Fa Punch, Aint The Right Phraze...I Turned you To Dust Like Breakin up White Haze...
I At Sight Blaze..It's a Slight Phase..Like Layer Changes On a Nice Day...
^^^^
filler. punch never hit at all


You Aint a Champ Or King...i'll Have you Toned Down Like Samples Stringd.. Onto Tracks...
You a Ducka People On To That..Be a Honest Rat..You Wouldnt 'Grip A Tech' Like Omish Cats
^^^^
best bar of your verse. punch was dope although ive heard u use it before in the chatroom


Conclusion
below average verse. again like our battle you had little to no personals. a few decent punches here and there. a bunch of forced shit but at least the flow was good. i think we`ll just leave it at that lyrics wise coz honestly i dont feel this verse requires a response.

Cee .. your a Hating Faggot It's Noticable.. .

You can Take ya Feed & Shove it Up Ya Ass..
I Ripped ya Lil "Moo Slims" Forced Shit...
And Dont Free post...


Uppin..

LMAO @ both haz and cee.

Im guessing this was a quick drop because u didnt bring ya best here. And i can tell.
It was still good though, much of it having that hazard grit and swagger. It was an enjoyable read, your punches were alright.
Good piece.

freepost time


ima only gonna say this once. how come anyone who goes at u 'is on your dick' and anyone who criticises your verses is a hater. u must honestly be retarded if u think this litte net spat is all me going at u because its going both ways and u know it. so please chill down with the "help cee4`s bullying me routine" nobody feels sorry for u and your weak diss verses. im gettin sick of this shit now. end of the day compare our records that tells u whos better. find anyone on this site who thinks ur better than me. also if theres pointless net beef hapening on illest who is always the common denominater? yep its always u involved with someone


Hazard got a mixtape comin but i doubt who will buy it
coz the only moo slims droppin weight are cows on a diet!
^^^

and yeah i see why u said thats forced but over here its pronunced moo slim
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/Muslim

dunno about May Ham tho lmao

i liked the punches n the style of the piece
"When I Write I Abuse Da Dope, Friend ya Hyped? Den Lose Ya Hope, End Ya Life i'll USE DA SCOPE..
Your Wack & Can't 'See Complexity Eye To Eye Its Like The Reason U REFUSE TA VOTE!.."

i like that shit

keep the drops droping

peace stay ^

U kids R Funny

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lol i liked the "ya styles week" and the "omish cats grippin techs" punches

piece kept me entertained, not bad dude

sum really good punches
here
hadda a good flow
never really fell off
consistent with the multies
which brought more power to the punch
this was dope Haz
keep'em comin

i fed this yesterday.. stupid comp..

it basically said.... nice punches, great flow, cool concepts, good clownin' verse.. the odd miss here and there.. but thats to be expected in a scripture piece... nice job..