War-fest vs Arvincible (Arvincible)

[Arvincible]

lets go seven bars, u called me out, it wouldnt hurt to go a little more

house rules, no freeposting, no flipping, no biting,

NO DICKRIDING!

7 bars
your choice of cats:

Opener
Personals
Punchlines
Metaphores
Wordplay
Closer

24 hours after check in
ill allow FAME to vote too just for you.

any other request let me know and ill change it.

unless ur gonna take a few weeks to find two more bars on ur prewritten shit

this is my check in.

u will no longer talk shit or stalk my post after this battle if i win.

[War-Fest]

[align=center](Ready for you to use 99999999 lines with F.A.M.E.'s name)



.Click clack.
..Let's get 'em..
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[Arvincible]

*expos in order
---he's gonna post a pic of me, (jockin fame's style)
and hes gonna post a bunch of adlibs, ive seen his style...
---his only form of trash talk is racism
---'KOK' sounds like 'cock'
---everything else looks easy to get



check it

imma show the viewers how im finna-killa-bad-kid with no mixed-in-fillers-added
see my prediction of ur written is its bitten-n-its-average with just a picture-fulla-adlibs!!

its only obvious ur asian bad-jokes-dont-work, n watever else this fag-wrote-wont-hurt
what u got on me? bitch ill have my 'lines all on you' like ur fuckin plaid-polo-shirt!!

and now u say u a Knock Out King? damn...FAME's sperm must've hurt-ya-vision
cuz even ya friends have the urge-to-listen as i "cut up this KOK" like circumcision!!

still u aint worth-the-dissin, but its funny to consider u n ya homie as a pair-of-dykes
cuz both the "marriage-type" after seeing FAME "IN-Fest" like some nasty 'parasite!!'

nigga what? everybody knows im better in looks, better wit girls n better-in-hoops,
so lemme prove im better in words as i have the faggot "War-torn" like injured veteran-troops!!

ur just a groupie, a hypeman, u have sex with ur right hand, ill leave ya face-gone..ur-wack
ur flow is trash see my verse will have you "fucked up" like my punch" laid-on-its-back"!!

imma choke u witta 'string of words' as if i wrote in 'cursive', now imma kill u with a universal:
..my bars-are-sweet, armed-with-heat, im like a 'boiled egg in hot water' u see im "hard-to-beat"!!



and thats how a stupid kid gets murked.

[War-Fest]

[align=justify]Expos.
Bar 1: Blitzkrieg = German for lightning war, used by Hitler in WW2
Arv is a tank.
Bar 2: Self explanatory
Bar 3: " " He posed as a girl on another forum.
Bar 4: On AIM a while back he said "I'm the blackest Asian you'll ever meet"
Arv = Acronym for AIDs related virus.
Bar 5: Mobsters use the term "whack" when sending a hitman to kill a target.
Bar 6: sumyungai = Broken English Asian for "some young guy".
Bar 7: Self Explanatory[/align]






[align=center]Knockout Kings up in this bitch.
..This is me just not givin' a fuck..
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Look
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You continue with your weak threats, but no one still sees you as a terrorist
But call me "lightning War", 'cause it's Arv I'm blitzing and bombing in this
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You're washed up, don't spit heat, your baby flames still pass a fire/pacifire
It's no longer a question... you like dressing up in your sister's pink attire
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Everyone knows that you posing as a girl pretty much sums up you are a dike
And then in threads this plastic (w)rapper still stays hugging my dick tight
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Only time you have "black in you" is taking it up the ass by a prison black man
Watch more TV kid, truth is, nobody wants Arv, need proof? Ask the Trojan man
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You never fell off, you've always sucked, even mobsters would call you a whack
You ball? Please bitch boy, I'm slamming more bricks over your head than Shaq
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I'm the reason Arv's girl screams in Spanish whenever getting fucked by a guy
Arv's a certified faggot, his favorite asian cuisine is the cream of sumyungai
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Funny, he calls me a fake herb, yet he's the one fucking with High Times weed
Over, you're dealt with so next time just dash more than inbetween your multis
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Kilt.[/align]

[8th]

First off, yall shouldn't use "explanations." People either get it or don't. And "cats" are gay as shit. I will explain my vote. So you can take this or not. BUT, I don't know either of you, and have never read anything from either of you. ha. But anyway...


Arvincible:

nigga what? everybody knows im better in looks, better wit girls n better-in-hoops,
so lemme prove im better in words as i have the faggot "War-torn" like injured veteran-troops!!

^That was prolly the funniest line. Prolly not the best rhyme-wise, but the best punchline. Overall, your verse was pretty good. It was pretty solid, with a couple nice punchlines. Use of multis was nice, not overdone. Some of the punches could been a bit harder, or maybe just reworded a bit so the effect was harder. overall, decent verse though.



War-Fest:

Verse was so so. I mean, it wasn't horrible, but it was that good. The flow was off, because there just wasn't the rhythm or rhyme in the lines to keep it going. The punches were pretty weak. I knew what you where going for, but for the most part they were either played, or didn't hit. The "sumyungai" was funny, but I've heard a comedian tell a similar joke, so it wasn't new to me. So jeah, overall, it was so so.



Vote: Arvincible



Stay up yall.

[War-Fest]

[align=center]Hmm..
Interesting..
..1-0..

Which punches did you think were weak?
Give me some feed.

And @ Me editing my post, I just fixed a few typos..
I didn't edit any lines at all.[/align]

[Omega Bill]

I'm going to break it down and not use cats because votes are better explained.

imma show the viewers how im finna-killa-bad-kid with no mixed-in-fillers-added
see my prediction of ur written is its bitten-n-its-average with just a picture-fulla-adlibs!!

This was a good personal and a punch using a past experience with the guy.


its only obvious ur asian bad-jokes-dont-work, n watever else this fag-wrote-wont-hurt
what u got on me? bitch ill have my 'lines all on you' like ur fuckin plaid-polo-shirt!!

Again, another nice personal and punch to finish it.

and now u say u a Knock Out King? damn...FAME's sperm must've hurt-ya-vision
cuz even ya friends have the urge-to-listen as i "cut up this KOK" like circumcision!!

Liked this bar a lot, flow was a little different being circ and hurt dont sound the same too me. Nice creativity though.

still u aint worth-the-dissin, but its funny to consider u n ya homie as a pair-of-dykes
cuz both the "marriage-type" after seeing FAME "IN-Fest" like some nasty 'parasite!!'

Nice wordplay, great punch.

nigga what? everybody knows im better in looks, better wit girls n better-in-hoops,
so lemme prove im better in words as i have the faggot "War-torn" like injured veteran-troops!!

Haha, this wasnt really hard hitting, but it was funny.

ur just a groupie, a hypeman, u have sex with ur right hand, ill leave ya face-gone..ur-wack
ur flow is trash see my verse will have you "fucked up" like my punch" laid-on-its-back"!!

Wasnt feeling this bar.

imma choke u witta 'string of words' as if i wrote in 'cursive', now imma kill u with a universal:
..my bars-are-sweet, armed-with-heat, im like a 'boiled egg in hot water' u see im "hard-to-beat"!!

Decent, wasnt feeling this bar either.

Now for War-Fest:

You continue with your weak threats, but no one still sees you as a terrorist
But call me "lightning War", 'cause it's Arv I'm blitzing and bombing in this

I liked this bar. Using the whole Blitzkrieg play on words was nice.
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You're washed up, don't spit heat, your baby flames still pass a fire/pacifire
It's no longer a question... you like dressing up in your sister's pink attire

Liked the punch, but it seemed the flow didnt connect. The punch was nice though.
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Everyone knows that you posing as a girl pretty much sums up you are a dike
And then in threads this plastic (w)rapper still stays hugging my dick tight

lol. Good punch, good delivery.
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Only time you have "black in you" is taking it up the ass by a prison black man
Watch more TV kid, truth is, nobody wants Arv, need proof? Ask the Trojan man

Wasnt feeling this bar, man. "Black in you" then saying "Prison black man" kinda offsets it.
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You never fell off, you've always sucked, even mobsters would call you a whack
You ball? Please bitch boy, I'm slamming more bricks over your head than Shaq

Nice punch, decent delivery.
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I'm the reason Arv's girl screams in Spanish whenever getting fucked by a guy
Arv's a certified faggot, his favorite asian cuisine is the cream of sumyungai

lol. Liked this punch a lot man. Had me laughin'.
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Funny, he calls me a fake herb, yet he's the one fucking with High Times weed
Over, you're dealt with so next time just dash more than inbetween your multis
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Nice punch.

Overall vote: Arv.

War-Fest I like your style. I think your flow in text might need some tweaking, and you have the creative ideas to be really good.

[Arvincible]

post it where ever u like kid


and thanks rell, and everybody else wonderful breakdown on cats and lol@ 8th a finally deciding to vote haha nice..


2-0
uppin for the Knock Out

[Dead Silence]

-Freepost Deleted-

[Haz]

imma show the viewers how im finna-killa-bad-kid with no mixed-in-fillers-added

Why boast um by Callin Him a Bad Kid , honestly Multi seemed eeh.
But your Buildin Up..

2/5

see my prediction of ur written is its bitten-n-its-average with just a picture-fulla-adlibs!!

Alright... Tryin To Attack The guy.

2/5

its only obvious ur asian bad-jokes-dont-work, n watever else this fag-wrote-wont-hurt

Alright.. I'm Waitin For a Execution..
2.5

what u got on me? bitch ill have my 'lines all on you' like ur fuckin plaid-polo-shirt!!

Sort Of Simple Play , but you Could say it got the job done,
2.5/5


and now u say u a Knock Out King? damn...FAME's sperm must've hurt-ya-vision
cuz even ya friends have the urge-to-listen as i "cut up this KOK" like circumcision!!

have to Take points Away For The Circumcision line, way to played

still u aint worth-the-dissin, but its funny to consider u n ya homie as a pair-of-dykes
cuz both the "marriage-type" after seeing FAME "IN-Fest" like some nasty 'parasite!!' ..

Aiight Took The rell Set Up With 'Whoeva In Wuddeva', you Worked it Out Nice
Though, The multis were Decent

3/5

nigga what? everybody knows im better in looks, better wit girls n better-in-hoops,
so lemme prove im better in words as i have the faggot "War-torn" like injured veteran-troops!!

Haha , Second line Cool.. 3/5

ur just a groupie, a hypeman, u have sex with ur right hand, ill leave ya face-gone..ur-wack
ur flow is trash see my verse will have you "fucked up" like my punch" laid-on-its-back"!!

First line was pretty Cool, & Then second line just completely fell off
2/5

imma choke u witta 'string of words' as if i wrote in 'cursive', now imma kill u with a universal:
..my bars-are-sweet, armed-with-heat, im like a 'boiled egg in hot water' u see im "hard-to-beat"!!

First line was eeh... & Second bar was just a played Kind of Concept & Seemed Sort of Wack.

2/5.

18/45

Vs.

Warfest.


You continue with your weak threats, but no one still sees you as a terrorist
But call me "lightning War", 'cause it's Arv I'm blitzing and bombing in this

Eeh Forced wordplay in This , & i Didnt like The Structure of The Bar

1/5
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You're washed up, don't spit heat, your baby flames still pass a fire/pacifire
It's no longer a question... you like dressing up in your sister's pink attire

I Mean the Pacifire play Sort of Seemed Weak & Wack
But you Attempted The Wordplay & i Guess it Came Off Better Then ya last bar
Didnt Like The Second line though 2/5.

Everyone knows that you posing as a girl pretty much sums up you are a dike
And then in threads this plastic (w)rapper still stays hugging my dick tight

1.5/5.. That Brought down ya points , No Hate... Listen...
The "Wrapper" Rapper.. Play is SO PLAYED, SOOO PLAYED...& you Should of
used Some Multis To Help your Flow.

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Only time you have "black in you" is taking it up the ass by a prison black man

^.. See This was wack , & Sort of gay in my Opinion.. Poor wording as Well

1/5

Watch more TV kid, truth is, nobody wants Arv, need proof? Ask the Trojan man

Eeeh... Again weak , I broke 2 bars In arv's battle Down line by Line
so 4 Line break down.. same 4 you... 1/5...T

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You never fell off, you've always sucked, even mobsters would call you a whack

2/5 i Mean you made some attempt to wordplay thru..

You ball? Please bitch boy, I'm slamming more bricks over your head than Shaq

2/5.. I Mean for the simple Fact Even though It's played Atleast your tryin tto diss & keep it Lyrical.
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I'm the reason Arv's girl screams in Spanish whenever getting fucked by a guy
Arv's a certified faggot, his favorite asian cuisine is the cream of sumyungai

I Didnt catch where This rhymed & It Was pretty Pointless, & It's like
Rappin about What his Favorite dish from his Culture is.. Not really a Diss.
1/5
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Funny, he calls me a fake herb, yet he's the one fucking with High Times weed
Over, you're dealt with so next time just dash more than inbetween your multis

3/5... For The simple Fact, each line Hit.. But Where The Fuck Did it Rhyme?
Could of made the score go higher..


11.5/45



Opener : Arv Mos Deff.
Personals : Arv
Punchlines : Didnt See Any that Swept The Battle , some Good 1's..Leaning toward Arv
Metaphores : Warfest
Wordplay : Both. both Had Attempts At wordplay thru Out Each verse
Closer : War Fest

Vote : Arvincible.

I Dislike you Both Equally,
This Was a Decent Battle... Arv you Came More Direct In The Battle..
You Did Fine, Some Cool Punches wouldnt Call This Battle a Cat Sweep
Deff Nice Way to attack your Opponent.

Warfest, you had Alot Of Attempts At Wordplay , But i Mean they Were Fine..
you Had No Multis... Most of The Time I Couldnt Catch your Flow , I Understand Where you Were Gettin At but , This jus Wasnt Up To Par.
you had Some Alright Punches , If you Worked On Rhymin ... Multis..
& Set ups you could get better

Anyways Decent Battle.

[War-Fest]

[align=center]*Sigh*..
Just as I expected.. This site is horrible in votes..
Hazard had the shittiest vote..
I had no wordplay in my first bar so how was it forced?
Arc didn't even have any punchlines in his verse at all..
Or wordplay either..
No one at this site is nice, I'll tell you that..
Y'all still on pussys and tampon lines..
Let alone using "like" to form every punchline..
I know I won that, anyone elsewhere would tell you..
I'm out this whack site, you want real action?
Meet me at rapbattles.com, rapmusic.com or hip-hop-royalty.com
Don't even be pussy and delete this as a freepost.. Voting already ended..[/align]

[Haz]

Lmao It's Easy To see You Tried To Attempt It Kid?

Discard My Vote you Big Bitch..
Anyways " Lightning war" blah blah blah, A Wack Ass Attempt,

Lmfao He Didnt have Any punches Or Wordplay your Playin Right?

Man i'll Come On All Of those Sites & murda you.

Your Warfest on them?.
and Battle me ... Drop in the battle grounds already Bitch nigga

[Dead Silence]

Vote counts
I do not see anything contriversal

3-0

KO

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