Hip Hop Forum

yeah. This is uhh...
a story. Just about...Well fuck it.
sit back and relax
Yo

Livin life to the fullest//
Not the sharpest tool nor Dullest//
I got the heart of 300 Soldiers//
I got Rome sittin on my shoulders//
Grass stains the only green these doods see//
Brass kanes lead the way to be me//
With 4 .44's sittin under my seat//
Fuck with ya oven and coz some real heat//
Dont giva fuck bout what you haters say//
because ill be the last one standing at the end of the day//
Go ahead and Kiss me Mr.Death//
Make ya hold ya last breath//
Itll be the last one you ever breath//
Fuck with this shit, It was only keyed....//

okay this was okay... flow was good, subject matter was weak... varied and all over the place... nothing stand out.. too short..

bro, if you want a hand... get at me, tell ya lable contact, bout a hundred for a feature, wanna battle?, i'll beat ya..

lol..

yeah get at me on msn.. and i'll offer you some advice..

i feel ya

no topic really
just w.e
a keystyle

and ive gotten advice from alot
and the only thing i learned was i gotta do me
and i learn by myself better

thanks anyways tho

i onlydropped this coz i was bored

lol... i know you's bored and that.. but if someone good is bored and drops something it'll still be something cat's can feel, ya dig??..

if you happy at ya level.. then fair enough..

im sure theres people out there who want to see you improve and improving lyrically will help your audios.. anyways..

the offers there.. like i said.. holla at me, tell ya label contact me lol..

^gtfo

ne ways mark

yeah ill holla at ya sometime if i feel the need

Dont giva fuck bout what you haters say
because ill be the last one standing at the end of the day

This was the line i liked best^ i can relate to this shit homie.
good job

thanks dood